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    drillmaster
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    This was a very exciting read. It was an interesting spin on preestablished Tenchi cannon but I have to ask, what prompted you to characterize the Juraians the way you did? It is so different that it is fascinating to explore them as seemingly arrogant rulers. Azusa less so, but to see Misaki cackle at the prospects of a slave’s death is so…unsettling.

    I was wondering why Funaho was seemingly nonexistent in the story. I was pleased to see her at the last part call Misaki and Azusa out on their behavior.

    Regardless, outside of some minor spelling and gramatical errors, it was very well done. I shall now begin Act II to see where you progress the story.