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    drillmaster
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    Well I can’t speak about Sailor Moon, since I don’t know how the characters act at all, nor can I really judge Seto outside of her small appearances in OVA 3 (which seem in line with what you wrote) but Jerren is a good standard archetypal hero. Right now we don’t know why he can do what he does, which I assume you will flesh out as time goes on, but if I were to critique anything I felt he trusted Ayeka too fast, especially with his views on Jurai. One second he was hating Jurai, the next second he had a sense of loyalty and duty. I get visions of The Pirates of Penzance, which played up that trait in the character of Frederick, or the slave of duty. It doesn’t change anything about the story, but I’d hope in time his origins and character got to be a bit more fleshed out in act 2.