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- October 7, 2013 at 5:59 AM
Scene: GP Maximum security prison Alpha one. GP officers were seen in uniform walking to a cell. “So whats the deal with this guy Othero?” Said one officer. The other officer man was walking with the other one, looked at the other one. “I don’t know. Supposedly this guy was the one who let ryoko go by, and attack the planet Jurai. Supposedly he used to be a hero knight like Yosho was.”
The officers moved to the deepest part of the station where there were a pair of steel doors. The one officer turned to the other. “I wonder if this guy knows ryoko actually helped that Earth boy Tenchi masaki take out Kagato.” They would say moving to a switch, pulling on the switch and pulled on the switch so the doors would open.
As the doors opened there was a bed, and there sat a man. What was weird was that the man looked like Ryoko, but his hair was red with silver streaks. He was in a orange prison jumpsuit, but he was held in a straightjacket like form. His arms were bound by straps. But suddenly, his arms moved past breaking his arms free. The man’s eyes opened as golden eyes opened then his head turned, looking at the guards. “Well I do now thanks for telling me. Hahahahahaha.” Suddenly there was a white glow from the room as the guards pulled their guns upwards pointing the guns at the man.
Yellow lasers fired from the guns at the man, but as the man turned, light hawk wings appeared. For right now there was two and they deflected the shots then the wings disappeared. He then brought up his right hand as a golden blast fired from him towards the guards. Moments later, there was a series of explosions in the prison before the space station exploded until the man hovered into the reaches of space. He brought up his right hand, snapping his fingers as a gray, silver, red and black cabbit ship came from behind him appearing behind him as the man phased into the ship. “Kyo-ohki to Earth.
“KyooooooooooThe ship then blasted off heading into the darkest part of space, moving space as the ship headed to Earth. A smirk on the face. He ripped off his jacket, now he was in a gray jumpsuit that was like the jumpsuit that ryoko had wore.. He laughed, siting in a chair as the ship headed to Earth.
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- October 8, 2013 at 2:28 AM
Hmmm an interesting quick introduction indeed. I like the fact that you have a mysterious character coming into play who seems to be of relation to Ryoko(perhaps her father or a version of her that was imperfect?) only time will tell.
The only issue I had was the shortness. I was getting rather immersed into it, which is a good thing.
You definitely started something ominous and a new enemy to deal with that seems to have a dark aura about him. I look forward to reading more. Keep it up!
"For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers." -
- March 18, 2014 at 11:00 PM
is there more than just one chapter because i really enjoyed it
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