What Kiyone Saw

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    Kiyone sighed and lifted the grocery bags off the counter.She wished that someone would have volunteered to come with her to the store,but they all seemed to be a bit busy.Washu was down in her lab ‘experimenting’ on Tenchi as per normal;and as per normal Tenchi was the relunctant guniea pig.Mihoshi had been called away to get dressed down by her grandfather at

    the GXP HQ for crashing the ship again for the Nth time.Aeka and Ryoko were having another one of their fights and had been banned from going anywhere near town for the next two weeks.

    Sasami might have been a help,but she had her schoolwork to do.

    That would have left Ryo-okhi,but even in her humanoid form she still had a overindulgent taste for carrots,and Kiyone didn’t want to pay extra for all the carrots that Ryo-okhi would be sure to make disappear(to put it lightly).

    So Kiyone sighed and started the walk back to the Masaki household.

    She was just rounding a corner when she heard a noise.

    It sounded like people yelling.

    And then when she got closer to the sound,she saw a spotlight.It was showing on a giant grayish mecha and then there

    were a group of four young women on top of a roof yelling something.They all seemed to be dressed in some sort of uniform.

    Definitely not the kind that the GXP would be issuing to it’s female members any time soon though,by the looks of it.

    She sensed rather than saw that the commotion was attracting other people as well.

    Everyone was starring up at the women on the roof now.This seemed to go on for awhile and then it stopped just as

    fast as it began.

    Walking past the house Kiyone noticed that the sign on it indicated that it belonged to the Sanada family.

    “Figures.”she thought,”I’ve heard that that Dr.Sanada is even crazier than Washu.”

    She hefted the bags and continued walking.

    “They’ll never believe me if I tell them.”she said and kept on going.

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      chucklocker
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      What a cool little one-shot! I love this Mitsuki Lover! And the fact that it’s Kiyone centered has nothing to do with it of course… 8-) But seriously, this is very fun and entertaining, and the fact that you worked in Dual is pretty cool too! Do you plan on doing any more of these little one-shots? Anyway, I hope you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it.
      wwwwhhhhoooo
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      chucklocker wrote:

      What a cool little one-shot! I love this Mitsuki Lover! And the fact that it’s Kiyone centered has nothing to do with it of course… 8-) But seriously, this is very fun and entertaining, and the fact that you worked in Dual is pretty cool too! Do you plan on doing any more of these little one-shots? Anyway, I hope you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it.

      I totally second this. It’s such a nice little short, easy read, & fun. Now that I’m starting to watch Dual! (finally) it’s fun to read a story incorporating cross-overs (& on that note, good choice using Kiyone wink wink). Thanks for sharing!

      Kiyami
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      Did you get this idea from that blink-and-you’ll-miss-it cameo Kiyone got in Dual? :)

      Nice fanfiction. Just watch punctuation; There is always a space after periods/commas/semi-colons, and try not to use parenthesis.

      I was writing as I went along,so I didn’t bother much with the editing.Thanks everyone for enjoying. :D

      Yeah,I did have the scene from the Dual Special in mind when I started.I wanted to get Kiyone’s perspective.I also

      wanted a bit of a backstory as to why she was doing the shopping.

      I was thinking of doing a bit of a jokey one next.It be Tenchi and company answering the fan mail.

      For Washuu
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      Ddaaaannngggit! Why didn’t I think to write this one???

      Very nice! :mrgreen:

      ookamilord
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      i love this and can someone tell me which episode had the blink and you miss in dual. i seen dual like 10 times and i never noticed now i have to look for her. kiyonesmile1
      Nobuyuki
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      ookamilord
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      thanks nobu kiyonesmile1
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