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    Breath slowly wafted into Masaki Tenchi’s nostrils as his consciousness roused itself from its slumber. His mind gradually became aware of the warm sheets and comforter around him, as well as the soft figure pressed against his side. He felt her breasts heave against his ribs with her sleeping breath, the pressure of her arms around his abdomen, her forehead resting on his shoulder.

    Gently, he curled his arm around her, hugging her as his mind clawed further from the grasp of his dreams. His other hand rested against hers, lightly tracing the outline of her fingers with his. He felt her groan quietly, snuggling closer against him, burrowing further into her own fantasy.

    Finally, the prince’s eyes blinked groggily open, finding the ceiling familiar from several of his late night fraternizations with his girlfriend. In Ryua Ryoko’s room, he rested in her bed with the former pirate sleepily curled at his side, her nude form cuddled to his. A dull light entered the room from beneath her door, reducing the room to sharp monochrome shadows.

    Carefully, he turned his head to face hers, feeling her gentle breath on his lips, his eyes meeting hers. Her usually fierce mane of cyan hair was matted and ruffled around her head, a few strands straying across her visage. Peace reigned over her expression, which usually was ruled by her many strong passions. He smiled softly simply watching her sleep in his embrace, feeling her warmth at his side.

    In time, Tenchi’s thoughts drifted to the previous night, after Ryoko’s match with Nagi. He remembered their discussion, witnessing her emotions shift from filial pride in her stories to a conflicted shame and spite. To reassure her, he embraced her, leading to a kiss under the moonlight. Then, when he turned to retire for the night, she stopped him, clutching his wrist, asking deeply and hotly that he stay with her.

    Thinking back now, he could see clearly the desire and need in her eyes, in her touch and breath. At the time, those qualities melted his resistance and drew him into her room, into her embrace. His thoughts were scattered as he yielded to her lead, unsure how to react, let alone the ethics of this situation. Consciously, he knew the carnal nature of her kiss and touch this night, and a rational part of him fought to speak. However, she silenced him time and again as she guided him into pleasure with her. In truth, his naïvety toward sexual indulgence left him weak to her wiles, not knowing how to respond to her skilled seduction. Naturally, part of him also was eager and anxious to be with her, to learn what she had to teach.

    To say that he was overwhelmed would be a crude understatement.

    In retrospect, he did consider the ethics of their night of passion. Did I take advantage of her? he asked himself. Should we have gone that far? Also, he wondered, Where does this leave us now?

    Pondering these questions, Tenchi saw a grin stretch across Ryoko’s lips before her amber eyes fluttered open and met his.

    “Good morning, lover,” she purred softly, warmly, her fingers gliding over his side, gently embracing him.

    He smiled back and kissed her lips lightly, answering, “Good morning to you too. Sleep well?”

    Her grin widened into a sly smile as she purred loudly, pressing herself more suggestively against him.

    “Oh, you have no idea.”

    Tenchi blushed modestly, still adjusting to this level of intimacy, while one of her fingers traced his musculature to his chest.

    “How about you?” she asked, her eyes leering back.

    “Yeah, I…” he started, searching for the best words to describe his feelings, “… I’m still trying to…”

    The Ryoan woman carefully pushed herself up from the bed, her face hovering over his, her long locks falling around their heads. While the Juraian prince might still be processing the past night, he could see the smoldering flames of desire flickering in her golden eyes at this moment. Her free hand cupped his cheek and gently stroked his skin, her eyes growing distant for a moment.

    “Trust me, my ‘student’,” she whispered huskily. “That will pass.”

    As she leaned into a passionate kiss with him, an answer to his first question became immediately clear.

    If anything, he thought, she’s taking advantage of me!

    Carefully, still unsure of himself, Tenchi guided his hands along her sides, feeling her muscles flex and wriggle under his touch. A low growl rumbled through her chest and lips as she broke the kiss and gazed deeply into his eyes, desirously, lustfully.

    “Time for Lesson Two,” her words wafted past his ear, one of her hands easing one of his to her chest, between her breasts, over her heart. He could feel her heart racing, beating heavily, and her lungs, breathing deeply.

    Needless to say, his other questions soon flew from his conscious thoughts while he succumbed to her wiles once again.

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    Alone, Masaki Tenchi strode down from the shrine, reflecting on the recent match. Watching the sisters fight had reminded him greatly of his own sparring engagements with his grandfather, particularly the shattered bokken. Whenever the young man saw victory within sight, his mentor would do the very same maneuver to wreck his resolve. “Giving up already?” he would chuckle. Naturally, Tenchi did learn the counter move in the Juraian style, involving fighting with the hilt and broken blade.

    However, Ryoko resourcefully switched to grappling instead when the legendary man had trained her. Both Katsuhito and Tenchi had been surprised at her solution to the problem, the younger never having considered it. The grandfather chuckled, pleased at her ingenuity and tenacity. No doubt, he had seen something similar in his experience, but had not expected it from her.

    After the match, Nagi wandered quietly back to the house with Sasami and the cabbits consoling her loss, and asking about this “date with a knight”. Washu trailed behind them, cackling to herself while she replaying the bout on her ethereal laptop. Ryoko shared a kiss with Tenchi before Katsuhito politely interrupted to pull him aside for some words. While her annoyance was certainly apparent, she relinquished her boyfriend for the moment.

    Together, the two princes walked toward the shrine, far away from the earshot of the women. Once they entered the priest’s office, Katsuhito broke the silence.

    “Ryoko has improved a good bit since I last saw her.”

    “She has, Grandpa,” Tenchi answered. “We’ve been preparing ever since the match was set.”

    Sagely, the great man nodded before he took a seat on the floor next to the window, his legs beneath him.

    “And, Nagi’s gotten better, I think,” the young man added, sitting similarly across from his grandfather.

    “She’s a lot like her sister, talented but very stubborn.”

    “Yeah, I can only imagine,” Tenchi chuckled.

    With a kind smile, Katsuhito poured both of them a cup of tea, which the former student accepted respectfully.

    “How are you and Ryoko getting along?”

    “Pretty good, I guess,” Tenchi blushed as he sipped his tea. “She really likes going out to clubs and dancing.”

    “She’s a spirited woman, Tenchi,” the nobleman commented plainly, “and she’s matured since coming here. You should be proud to be with her.”

    Distantly, the younger fellow glanced to the side and nodded. “I am, Grandpa. She’s great, and I love being with her, around her.”

    Watching him closely, the elder prince observed the changes in his heir: a tightness in his body, deeper breath, the long gaze. In training Tenchi and Ryoko between the reunion and the recently events in Manhattan, Katsuhito had witnessed the two growing closer firsthand. He knew well the heated gazes the two had exchanged when they believed him unaware. Ryoko, naturally, made little pretense to conceal her affections, though Tenchi had kept his feelings closely hidden then, for rather apparent reasons.

    Though now openly affectionate, the legend’s protégé still held some of his feelings to himself, particularly the guilt that was bleeding into his voice and gaze.

    “We’ve started talking some about taking a trip together, just us. I’m not sure yet, really.”

    Listening to Tenchi describe this proposed vacation, Katsuhito could feel the young man’s apprehension. The priest had seen the source of his grandson’s trouble and raised his sword to stop her. Honestly, he could see why the boy was so afflicted, as his growing passions had driven her farther down her ill-fated path, even if this was not his intention. The great man knew that feeling very well.

    “What do you think, Grandpa? I mean, you know the galaxy far better than either of us.”

    “You should go,” Katsuhito said plainly.

    “Are you sure?” Tenchi questioned. “After all…”

    “Tenchi,” the elder gentleman interrupted, quieting the boy. “Do you love her?”

    “Yes, I do,” he answered without hesitation. “I just…”

    “Then, you should put her first,” the reply came again.

    Tenchi turned back to his grandfather, their eyes meeting. Looking deep into his senior’s sight, the young prince could see experience staring back, and a familiar feeling ringing in his voice.

    “Your regrets are becoming doubts, Tenchi,” he warned, “and they will devour you.”

    A somber expression crossed the young prince’s face as he listened to the teacher’s knowing words.

    “You can’t change what’s happened, nor to whom it happened. Even if you could, I expect you know well that the effects could become very dangerous.”

    Tenchi thought about all the temporal troubles from his excursion to 1970 and the balancing act of finding and ending Kain to save Achika. He had thought briefly of using Washu’s equipment to return to 1997 and spare Ayeka the corruption that followed. However, the more he considered the idea, he could not see how to rescue her without interfering with subsequent events. Earth, and perhaps Jurai, might have fallen without the power she gained through her torment.

    Katsuhito rested his hand on his grandson’s shoulder and added, “She has made her choice and is safe from harm. Let her go.”

    The young prince glanced down into his tea, looking at his reflection on its surface, his brows furrowed somberly.

    “It feels wrong, Grandpa. She was so hurt.”

    “I know.” The legendary warrior patted his protege’s shoulder as he added, “She’s a strong woman, though she might not realize it herself, and she is hardly alone.”

    Slowly, the boy’s eyes rose back to his elder’s as he continued, “She will heal, as will you. However, you have a woman here who loves you, and needs you.”

    Tenchi had acknowledged how Ryoko had changed often in the last two months, how she had matured. She thought more about the consequences of her actions and better controlled her passions, like in the match with her sister. As he just admitted, she now spoke with him about future plans together, wanting to spend her time with him. Recalling the time after Kagato’s coup ended, he remembered how lonely he had been, his worry for her, and his elation when she returned. He now found it difficult to picture his life without her, and wondered about the reverse.

    “You are no longer a boy, Tenchi,” Katsuhito said, drawing his hand back and sipping his tea once more. “What you do now defines you as a man.”

    Thoughtfully, the young prince likewise sipped his tea. After a moment, he took a breath and asked knowingly, “What was her name, Grandpa?”

    “Haruna,” he answered softly.

    “Care to tell me about her?”

    Now an hour later, Tenchi descended along the path from the shrine and heard Ryoko’s voice laughing aloud nearby. Quietly, he followed a narrow, recently blazed trail to find her kneeling next to a grave marker in a small, secluded clearing. Composed of a deep, glassy obsidian, the burial marker rose flush to the ground, inscribed with Juraian script translating as “Ryua Ryoshu”.

    “She never saw it coming!” she chuckled. “The ‘unbeatable’ bounty hunter was so focused she burned all that time to strike!” She scoffed and shook her head. “After all that, she had to gloat!” Smirking, she added, “I guess since she’s chased me so long, I shouldn’t be too surprised. I wonder if she gets that from her old man. She certainly didn’t get it from you.”

    Tenchi cleared his throat softly, drawing her attention back to him. Ryoko smiled widely and added, “Well, that’s all I really needed to say, Mom. I think my man has finally finished with the taskmaster.”

    The prince bowed toward the gravestone with a soft apology for his interruption before she rose and hugged him close and tight.

    “What took you so long?” she asked, stealing a kiss. “I had enough time to go tell her about the whole fight, among everything else.”

    “I’m sorry, Ryoko,” he said apologetically. “He needed to talk to me about some shrine business. It took longer than I thought.”

    “Is he still trying to rope you into taking his place?” she queried, a brow lowered in annoyance.

    “Yeah,” he replied, scratching the back of his head lightly, “it’s a big decision, and he’s not really getting younger.”

    “Hey, he can get one of those guys from another shrine, right?”

    Tenchi nodded. “Yeah, he could, but do you really want someone who doesn’t know about what goes on here?”

    For a moment, Ryoko’s lips pursed in thought before she answered worriedly, “Okay, you have a point, but what about your art? You’re starting to get good.”

    “Artists aren’t really known for making lots of money, and I need to support the household somehow. Besides, I could draw in my off time.”

    She rested a finger on his forehead and poked a bit roughly. “That’s my time, Masaki Tenchi.”

    Sweat beaded in his hair as he grinned wryly. “Right, right…”

    He glanced over to the gravestone, which presided over the final resting place of Ryua Ryoshu, mother to both Ryoko and Nagi. Tenchi had met her, in a sense, nearly three months ago in Manhattan. Just after he confessed his love for Ryoko, the beautiful figure of Ryoshu stepped out from the black fire of the NVO distortion. Her spiked, fallow hair fell in a long tail to her ankles, fanning at its end. Though her red and black gown blended into the shadows around her, he could discern her figure, which seemed voluptuous like Ryoko’s. However, her gait and bearing were shared with Nagi, particularly the cool blue glare she gave them both upon their meeting.

    Yet, the green marks along her face and neck, as well as the blue sclera, signaled who he was actually meeting. Within the Ryoan body was the power and mind which gave the people of Ryua their great abilities, Tokimi. From all the evidence he has seen, this godlike entity has been the impetus behind all the recent turmoil in their lives: Kagato, Kain, Liaens, and perhaps others.

    After the goddess’s defeat in Manhattan, Ryoshu’s body was recovered without damage from the remnants of Tokimi’s masked attire. While Nagi was silent on the matter, Ryoko asked Katsuhito that their mother be laid to rest here on Earth, hidden away from “that bitch”. Understandingly, he accommodated her request. Since then, Tenchi had worked to divorce Tokimi’s twisted voice from the image of his girlfriend’s mother.

    “How was your talk?” he asked kindly.

    “One-sided, as usual,” Ryoko quipped back. “She never really liked hearing my stories.”

    The young prince watched a distant warmness flicker into her eyes as her mind drifted into nostalgia. He smiled softly and kissed her lips ever so lightly.

    “Why’s that?”

    With a smile, she scoffed, “Because I’d tell her about how I beat up the boys in the guild. Would your mom like hearing how you whipped all the neighborhood kids with your sword?”

    Wryly, he nodded. “Okay, I could see that, though why did you tell her that you beat up your sister?”

    Her palm cupped his cheek and lightly patted it while she answered, “I think she’d like to know that we did it as peacefully as we did.” She paused, leaning her lips closer to his. “And,” she whispered, “I think she’d like to know that Sis is going out with one of the first knights of Jurai,” before kissing him again.

    He reciprocated her affections, drawing her close against him as the sun rays began to vanish from the horizon. Carefully, he broke the kiss and motioned back to the house.

    “Why don’t we head home? It’s really starting to get late.”

    “Fine,” she retorted, “if you insist.”

    Stealing another kiss, she slipped from his arms and took his hand before the pair bowed respectfully to the gravestone. As the sounds of night began to surround them in the dying light, Ryoko nudged closer, spurring Tenchi to wrap his arm around her shoulders. At that moment, he realized that he had left Ryoko’s bracelet, Nagi’s hairband, and both cloaks back at the shrine.

    “Oh, I’m sorry,” he apologized, stopping in mid-stride. “I completely forgot both your stuff and Nagi’s at Grandpa’s.”

    She hesitated for a moment before she waved the topic aside, answering, “I don’t really want to deal with the old man tonight.”

    With a nod, the couple continued into the growing darkness, the late autumn chill closing around them both. Gently, her arms snaked around him while he glanced down at her, their eyes meeting. The moonlight above glimmered off her irises, causing them to illuminate in his shadow. He slowed his gait to kiss her forehead lightly.

    “Like a little lost kitty,” he whispered.

    She rolled her eyes and slapped his chest softly. “’Lost kitty’, my ass!”

    Tenchi chuckled and sighed hard, melting into her as she did into him. Over the next few steps, his gaze grew distant with thought before he whispered, “Do you think she’d approve of me?”

    Ryoko furrowed her brows. “Who? Nagi? Who cares what she thinks?” she replied flippantly.

    “No,” the prince stated, “your mother, the real her.”

    Stunned, her golden gaze lowered to the ground while he continued, “It’s like with my mom. I lost her when I was very young and never really knew her.” Nostalgia filled his eyes as he smiled thoughtfully. “Traveling back to 1970, I saw a side of her I never knew, or at least never remembered.”

    The memories of the former pirate drifted back to their jaunt into history, how she and Ayeka infiltrated Achika’s house under the guise of transfer students. The raven-haired girl was vibrant, coyly flirtatious, not at all what she expected from Katsuhito’s daughter. Still, she saw some of Tenchi’s strength peeking through her, particularly when her power awoke so briefly.

    Sadly, the cyan-maned woman envied her boyfriend’s memories of his mother. When Ryoko now recalled her mother’s image, the beautiful face was marred by leaflike markings tracing down her cheeks and neck. She remembered how the hands which carried her as a child commanded dark lashes that burned her beloved and her sister. The eyes which protectively watched over her scowled disapprovingly, even spitefully, at both siblings. That desecration of her mother’s form still churned hatefully in Ryoko’s heart.

    She clutched Tenchi a bit closer as she whispered softly, “Mom would love you, Tenchi.”

    “Why’s that?” he whispered back.

    “Because you did what she kept trying to do,” she answered, glancing back up to him, “get me out of the guilds.”

    His eyes met hers. “Can you tell me about her?”

    “Mom…” the former pirate began, “she could be so wildly different at times.” She motioned to the left with her head. “When everything was going right, she was very kind.” She scoffed with a slight smile, “She volunteered to teach the other guild kids literature with me. She’d also bandage up all the boys’ scrapes from… well, being boys…”

    Ryoko then motioned to the right. “But, when someone pissed her off, she could be a cast-iron bitch.” She laughed to herself, “There was this one time when a couple guys and I were out pinching purses. We each took turns being the lookout while the others snatched the coin pouches or card-folds of our marks. I swear, when Mom found out, she nearly tanned all our hides!”

    Tenchi smiled warmly listening to her story, hearing about Ryoko’s past, as well as her mother’s. His arm kept her close as she shook her head and continued, “Now, she was pretty lenient on kids. If you wanted to see her explode, you should’ve seen her argue with the pirates. Over and over, the guild leaders kept badgering her to work with them, especially with me already apprenticing.” Her eyes closed with a wide smile. “If you think that I have a filthy mouth, you should have seen her rattle off curses in Juraian, as well as old Ryoan and a couple other languages I don’t know. Her hands would grip so tight and spark real bright when she was ready to go off.”

    Kissing atop his beloved’s head, the prince commented, “She sounds like you.”

    Blushing, she lightly slapped the back of his head. “I’m not some school teacher, Tenchi!”

    Chuckling, he braced his head playfully and added, “Okay, okay.”

    Soon, the Masaki estate stood before them shrouded in the shadowy dusk. Lights from the windows illuminated their passage toward the door, sharp contrasts falling over the couple.

    Softly, the young man asked, “You miss her, don’t you?”

    “Of course, I do,” her response came, honestly. “I loved…”

    I’m not your daughter! her memory screamed out. I certainly hate your ass!

    In that moment, the shadows configured as they did when Tokimi first appeared in the NVO distortion, a colonnade corridor of darkness. The image of her mother, tough with a good soul, blinked back to the face used by the goddess, cold with vicious intent. The happy memories blurred with the twisted ones.

    Ryoko stopped on the threshold of the house. Within her, the feelings of affection for her mother and hate for the dark goddess wrung taut in her heart. The conflict between those two visages and the words she said to each brought a shame to her eyes, despite what her intellect told her.

    “Tenchi, my mother, the woman who raised me…” Ryoko began, turning to Tenchi, raising her eyes to his, “she was my family before Ryo-Ohki, before I came to Earth and met you and everyone else here.” She looked aside, her brows glowering. “Sure, others in the guild acted like, or tried to be, a family, but it wasn’t real.” Then, her hands slid up her shoulders, pulling her arms close and tight against her body, her voice wavering with stronger filial emotions of spite and disgust. “And then, to have that bitchwear her face like a…!”

    A scowl etched itself into her face, and tears appeared at the corners of her eyes, real tears. Sympathy twisted into his heart watching her react to his question, and he placed himself in her position: if someone tried to take his mother’s place, to corrupt her memory. No doubt, he would feel just as wronged, just as dirtied.

    Then, he remembered it was his question that sent her down this path. He hung his head somberly and wrapped his arms around her, tight and warm against the night’s chill.

    “I didn’t mean…” he began.

    “I know you didn’t,” she interrupted, snaking her arms around him and pulling close to him.

    In that moment, he kissed her forehead gently, apologetically, and she replied by kissing his neck, her hands raising along the back of his neck, urging him closer. His eyes opened briefly and met hers, feeling drawn into her passionate emotions as he lowered his lips to hers. The night fell silent to them, only the breath and touch of the other filling their immediate concerns for the next few minutes.

    Yet, when they broke the kiss, the chill nipped at them again, despite the heavy beating of their hearts and the warmth of each other’s breath and touch. In silence, Tenchi opened the door for his beau to enter, whereupon he wrapped his arm around her again and escorted her up the stairs to her room. There, she cracked the door open as he stood aside, steadying his heart to leave for the evening.

    Then, her hand clasped his wrist, her golden eyes staring deep into his. Her gaze still held its fiery luster, but seemed darker, keener. Her grip was tighter, insistent. He could feel her arm shake slightly, wanting to pull him to her once more.

    “Stay with me,” she whispered, deeper in tone, heated in quality.

    Loneliness, he heard ringing in his mind. Most of her life, she had been alone. When she had genuine affection, like her mother or Nagi’s father, it was torn away from her. Now, she had found warmth in him, for her, and she wanted to keep it nearby, always.

    Tenchi yielded himself to her, stepping forward into her embrace, and the door closed quietly after him.

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    Ryua Ryoko’s amber eyes frowned with frustration. Again and again, she swung her weapons against her opponent, but each time, they were dodged or deflected. Her hands gripped tightly at each hilt while she spun, whirling attack after attack upon her foe.

    Dressed in a white gi and red hakama, the Ryoan woman wielded a pair of bokken, each pounding against the single implement held by her opponent. Her cyan mane was tied behind her head into a bloom of spikes, clearly showing her elfin ears and the feline features of her eyes. Her nose flared when her foe braced his bokken in his free hand, letting both of hers slide along its edge impotently.

    Her nemesis then swiped at her, forcing her to kick away and regather her defense. Masaki Tenchi rose against her, dressed in a white gi and blue hakama. As always, his raven-black hair was tied in a tail behind his head, though its length was greater than before. Cool and focused, the Juraian prince met her gaze as he held his weapon before him, both hands on the hilt.

    In a moment, his blade dropped toward his right before he slid toward her, a slash approaching fast at her left. At once, her right sword crossed her body to meet his, while she swung the left down towards his collar. However, he knelt and rolled to her left, avoiding the strike entirely and rising back to his feet.

    The two turned to face one another anew, and she rushed toward him, a scowl on her brow. The woman struck with her left, but the man deflected it. The Ryoan thrust with her right, and the Juraian dodged it. Their strikes accelerated, the cracks of their wooden weapons hammering a percussive beat to their dance.

    With every missed strike, Ryoko’s glare became harder, more frustrated, until Tenchi swept beside her and tagged her rear with the flat of his blade. At this, she threw her bokkens onto the ground forcefully.

    “Dammit!” she cursed loudly. “This isn’t helping anything!”

    Tenchi lowered his sword and approached her slowly. He had seen the frustration building, felt the tension and expended strength in each blow they exchanged. However, being Ryoko, she never said anything, though he had a fairly clear idea as to the cause. The onsen incident last week had infuriated her, and she needed some form of release.

    Of course, being Tenchi, he had not pried, leaving her to stew over the matter and reveal it in her own time. Now, he could see the trouble this issue was causing her. In their last sparring match a week ago, she had held her ground against him, even laughing and flirting when he tagged her, or vice versa.

    “Ryoko,” he said as he rested his free hand on her shoulder, “talk to me. What’s wrong?”

    Her amber eyes turned to meet his, and for that moment, he could see the seething anger she was holding inside. However, she lowered her eyes from him, hiding that part of herself.

    “It’s nothing, Tenchi,” she sighed as she folded her arms. “I’m just off today.”

    The prince dropped his bokken and walked before her, resting both his hands on her shoulders, his eyes looking directly at hers.

    “Ryoko, please,” he pleaded, concern on his words. “It’s been bothering you for a week now.”

    Quietly, he waited while his girlfriend wrestled with herself. Since he has known her, Ryoko had never been adept at showing her true feelings. The cyan-maned fury would usually put forth a passionate bravado to mask whatever really motivated her. In the past month, he had actually seen more of her than he had in the past three years, as she began to open herself to him. The process had been slow, and she would slip back into her old ways. However, his patience had now begun to reward him.

    “It’s not fair, Tenchi,” Ryoko grumbled, her golden eyes rising to his once again. “I did nothing to start that fight, and I get locked out of the onsen.”

    “What happened, Ryoko?” he asked carefully. “You two haven’t exactly talked much since she moved here.”

    “We don’t exactly mingle in the same ‘circles’,” she said sarcastically.

    Sweat beaded in his hair as he agreed, “Fair enough, but you are sisters, right? You two do have some things in common.”

    “That was what I was trying to tell her when she got pissed off,” Ryoko retorted. “I was asking her how her training with your granddad was going.”

    “What did she say?”

    Nothing,” she answered, rolling her eyes. “She was practically a brick wall.”

    “Then, what did you talk about?” the prince asked quizzically.

    “What else?” the Ryoan rhetorically replied, her eyes sliding back to his knowingly. “Men.”

    Tenchi blushed at this while her hands glided from her arms and along his sides, holding him close. The pair had grown quite close in the past month, despite the young man’s caveat not to rush into intimacy. He greatly enjoyed his time with her on their dates, as well as just laying on his bed, or hers. However, he did still find himself a bit self-conscious about some of the kisses and caresses, partially because of his inexperience in romance.

    “Don’t worry,” Ryoko said with a sly grin on her lips. “I didn’t tell her anything juicy.”

    “Well, thank you for that,” he chuckled nervously, lightly scratching behind his head.

    “She’s clearly jealous,” she purred, “even though I know a couple guys she could easily have if she wanted.”

    “Is that what you talked about?” he gulped, blushing still.

    “Yeah,” she said with a sigh, “until she slapped my sake out of my hand.”

    “Wait,” Tenchi interjected, confused. “Why’d she do that?”

    “Hell if I know!” she retorted. “Here I was, trying to help her out, and she starts bitching at me!”

    The prince felt his stomach sink. In her piratical days, his girlfriend had broken numerous laws, sometimes with the best of intentions. On one such occasion, she robbed a Juraian bank to recuperate the money she had selfishly squandered when the household made its way to confront the usurper. However, her good intentions often were masked by her rash and shortsighted methods.

    “And, how exactly were you going to help her?”

    “I was hoping to set her up on a date,” she said plainly, pushing a lock of hair aside her brow.

    Tenchi was not prepared for that response. Immediately, his mind went blank wondering what man Ryoko could possibly pair with her half-sister, the cold-hearted and very violent bounty hunter.

    “A date? With whom?”

    “Well,” the Ryoan woman started as she leaned closer and whispered softly into his ear, “Kamidake!”

    His eyes popped open as he jerked back. “The knight Kamidake?!” he blurted out.

    “Yeah,” she acknowledged with a devious sparkle to her eye, “I saw how he looks at her, and how she looks back.”

    Admittedly, Tenchi did not know the crimson knight very well, nor his azure partner. Both were great warriors from the first court of Jurai who had been sealed away after a great battle. Katsuhito had raised them to aid in defeating the usurper during the coup d’etat, and both had also participated in the defense of Jurai and Earth in the last few months. Of course, those all were quite stressful times, and Tenchi did not take the time to talk with either man at length.

    However, as he thought back to the reunion on Jurai, Kamidake was present when Nagi’s father revealed himself. He also volunteered to accompany Ryoko to the enemy’s vessel to rescue the huntress. During the recent incident in Manhattan, Tenchi spent a significant amount of time in the infirmary from his wounds while protecting Ryoko, but later heard that Kamidake was likewise wounded, protecting Nagi.

    “Still, Ryoko,” Tenchi stammered, “he’s a Juraian knight, and she’s…”

    “A bounty hunter,” Ryoko completed for him. “So what, Tenchi? If they’re interested, why don’t they take a shot?”

    “Well, isn’t it a bit complicated,” he asked, “him on Jurai and her here on Earth? And, doesn’t Jurai have a lot of social classes?”

    “To hell with society bullshit!” she barked back. “That didn’t stop me from going after you!”

    Sweat beaded in Tenchi’s hair as he said, “We also didn’t know I was part Juraian until after we met.”

    “Come on, Tenchi!” she sighed as she rolled her eyes. “Nagi’s got a rod so far up her ass, that she can hardly bend over. Admit it. She could use someone to lighten her up.”

    “Is that how you suggested it to her?”

    “More or less, yeah,” the former pirate answered, glancing to the side.

    He took a slow, deep breath and sighed, “No wonder she slapped your drink out of your hand.” Gently, he cupped her cheek and said, “Ryoko, think about how Nagi sees all this. I remember what her dad said about how she was treated on Jurai.”

    “I don’t think he’d do that to her,” she muttered.

    “No, I doubt he would,” he admitted, “but I don’t think that’s how she heard it. I mean, if you think about it, her dating Kamidake wouldn’t be that different from her dad dating your mom. And, she’s very sensitive about that.”

    Tenchi could see the realization in Ryoko’s amber eyes. She knew now what she had said to spark the fight, as well-meaning or light-hearted as it had been. For a moment, guilt crept into her face. Since the reunion, since learning of her connection to Nagi, Ryoko had shown genuine concern for her sibling, in her own way.

    Then, her brows furrowed, her eyes closing with a heavy breath. He could feel her tense in his arms, feel the anger starting to flow off of her as she thought back to the incident in the onsen.

    “That still doesn’t excuse what she said.”

    Worried, he asked the obvious question, “What did she say?”

    “… That I was sleeping with you…”

    “That’s… never bothered you before…” he said with a bit of blush to his cheeks.

    “… I know, Tenchi,” she whispered, her eyes turning back to his, “but it’s different now…”

    The prince saw it again, guilt, heavy guilt. Truthfully, Tenchi did not yet have the skill his grandfather did at reading people, but he had learned well. The young man’s main flaw was not gullibility, but rather his trusting nature. However, living with Ryoko for three years has taught him to be less so, particularly with someone who is adept at lying, and omission.

    Yet, his concern for her tempered his response. Her anger was very real, unlike than the facades she has worn before. Whatever was really said hurt her, enough to break her armistice with Nagi.

    He snaked an arm around her waist and pulled her closer as he whispered, “Please, Ryoko, what did she say?”

    Her teeth gnashed as she fought the answer that passed from her lips. “… That I slept with you… while Ayeka was here…”

    Chills rushed through him, and his heart sank deep into his chest. He could feel the same guilt clawing its way into his chest as she did. Dumbfounded, words abandoned him.

    “She said that I was why she…” Ryoko whispered, her voice tainted with regret, anger, and frustration.

    Tenchi and Ryoko had not discussed Ayeka since she left Earth. She told them all that she had to reflect on her life, to recover from what was done to her in Manhattan. Her words did hold truth in them, but all three of them knew a second, unspoken reason she wanted to leave.

    “… That… was too far, Tenchi,” Ryoko hissed, “so I slapped her… and then we fought…”

    The prince glanced aside, his emotions confused and in disarray. Like Ryoko, he was angry at Nagi for saying something so cruel, particularly to her own sister. He sympathized with the huntress some, considering Ryoko’s own callous remarks.

    But, his own regret and guilt seeped into his mind. His indecision was one of the pressures that had fueled the darkness that had been consuming Ayeka. His choice had broken her heart, allowing room for that shadow to overwhelm and nearly destroy her. Moreover, he could do nothing to undo what happened.

    Gently, Tenchi stepped out of Ryoko’s grasp and sat on a nearby log, his brown eyes set on the ground below silently. Ryoko followed and sat with him, her hands clasped in her lap as she glanced over to him, watching his lost expression.

    “Tenchi, are you mad at me?” she asked.

    Softly, he answered, “A little, yeah, at both of you.”

    She rested both of her hands on his knee and looked into his eyes. “I’m sorry, about what I said and the onsen.”

    “I know,” he answered with a nod, “and I forgive you both.”

    Quiet passed between them while Tenchi continued to push through the haze of his feelings. Ryoko moved her hands back into her lap and lowered her eyes as well.

    “It’s Ayeka, isn’t it?” she whispered somberly.

    “Yes.”

    Her hands clasped tighter as all her fearful doubts leaked into her thoughts. Tenchi could hear the strain in her voice as she spoke to him.

    “She’s why you… don’t want to…?”

    He blinked and slowly turned to face her.

    “Ryoko, no,” he said softly, gently. “She’s not why.”

    He could see tears at the edges of her eyes. While Ayeka lived in the Masaki estate, she and Ryoko definitely had had their differences, but in that time, they also shared a great deal. They watched the same shows, drank together, and hatched plans together. While neither would openly admit it, they did become friends, as well as rivals for the same man’s affections.

    “Do you love her, Tenchi?” the cyan-maned woman asked quietly, fearfully.

    A knife went through his heart. He had cared for both of them, as well as all of the tenants who had come to reside in his home, even Nagi. Ryoko and Ayeka, however, were the two for whom he felt the strongest, but he knew what she meant now.

    “Not like I love you, Ryoko, but I do care about her.” His eyes lowered, shame in them, as he added, “I never wanted to hurt either of you… It’s not your fault Ayeka left. It’s mine.”

    The tears rolled down her face as he continued taking the blame for himself. “I’m the one who said nothing. I’m the one who led you both along. I’m the one who broke her heart. It’s my fault.”

    He could feel his heart bleeding, tears rolling from his own eyes. “I hurt her, someone I care about, so why should I be happy?”

    As the guilt welled in his heart, he felt her fingers gently caress his cheek and turn his face back to hers again. Her golden eyes met his, honestly, no deception.

    “Because you’re a good man, Masaki Tenchi. You try so hard to make everyone else happy. It’s your turn, time for you to be a little selfish.”

    She drew him closer until their lips touched, hers parting to join with his. For a moment, the couple shared a gentle kiss before their mouths separated, allowing their eyes to meet once more.

    “I love you, Tenchi,” she whispered softly. “Let me carry some of this blame with you.”

    Silently, he nodded as they slowly and warmly embraced one another.

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    Though the world as a whole was stunned by the alien advent in New York six weeks ago, young couples still courted despite the shocking news. In Okayama Prefecture, the city Kurashiki was home to the Great Seto Bridge, which spanned across the Seto Inland Sea to Kagawa Prefecture. Much like its sister bridge, the Golden Gate Bridge in San Francisco, the grand structure attracted tourists to the area, including young lovers in need of a romantic backdrop. As such, several restaurants of differing styles have established themselves on either side of the bridge to serve those who visit.

    One particular Italian eatery rested near the foot of the bridge on the Okayama side, and its windows gave a splendid view of the sea and the illuminated construction at night. Within, patrons sat conversing over their various dinner choices, some discussing the recent news. Others traded words about their daily highlights between bites of a bread stick, but most of the young couples flirted while waiting for their food.

    Masaki Tenchi, however, quietly watched as his companion gazed out the nearby window at the great bridge. In the three years Tenchi had known Ryua Ryoko, she had always had an affinity for this structure, especially in the silver glow of the moon. Even in the ideal world she discovered with the dimensional tuner, she inevitably found her way to the Golden Gate Bridge. The soft smile she wore now was very similar to the one she had then.

    For the past month, Tenchi and Ryoko have been officially dating. After the chaos in New York, they took two weeks to settle back into their usual routines before they went on their first date. Surprisingly, despite her usual aggressive nature, Ryoko readily agreed to wait.

    I shouldn’t be that surprised, Tenchi thought. She went through a lot.

    Yet, after those two weeks ended, the cyan-maned woman promptly asserted her claim to his heart. The young prince was walking down the stairs from the Masaki shrine after an afternoon of helping Katsuhito clean the floor of the haiden.

    “Tenchi…” her voice whispered behind him.

    The young man knew the tone well. Not long after they first met, Ryoko had bound him with rope and snuck into the yokai cave with him in tow. There, she had planned to seduce the teenager with her femininity, though this plan was promptly foiled through the intervention of others.

    Tenchi turned toward her voice, but her words rose again near his ear.

    “Oh, Tenchi…”

    He grinned to himself when he heard the soft whoosh of air behind him. An arm snaked across his chest, her fingers lightly cupping his cheek. Her other hand slid down his abs and rested her hand on his opposite him. Her chest pressed against his back while she whispered softly into his ear.

    “There you are.”

    Her breath warmed his skin, sending a shiver down his spine. One of his hands cupped hers while he turned his head to see her beautiful visage gazing back. Pleased, Ryoko’s amber eyes narrowed as she smiled slightly.

    “You’re pretty sensitive,” she commented, her fingers lightly tracing his jawline.

    Tenchi blushed and glanced aside anxiously.

    “Really?”

    She nodded slowly before blowing lightly over his ear again. Her arms drew him closer when he reacted. Her smile grew as she kissed his neck and shoulder, a purr rising from her chest.

    Finally, she thought, he’s all mine.

    Carefully, he turned in her embrace to face her, his arms sliding around her sides. The Ryoan woman held him close as they both leaned into a kiss. The prince parted his lips from his partner’s, meeting her eyes with his.

    “Where have you been?” he asked. “I haven’t seen you all day.”

    Mischievously, she leered at him. “Just… thinking.”

    A drop of sweat rolled down his brow. “’Thinking’?”

    “Mmhmm.”

    She gently pushed him back against a tree, pressing herself into him. Caught by surprise, Tenchi’s eyes widened, his blush even brighter as her lips slid past his.

    “About what?” he asked dumbly.

    “Oh, what to do with you,” Ryoko whispered hotly, her eyes fixed on his.

    Her feline eyes gleamed, seeming to glow in the shade of the forest around them. To say Tenchi was excited would be a gross understatement. Having a beautiful woman like Ryoko tease in this way would erode any man’s resolve. Though the young prince was very virtuous and honorable, his imagination quickly depicted some of what Ryoko was certainly considering. He took a deep breath, his heart beating hard against his chest, not unlike hers.

    As he released his wind slowly, its heat fell upon her lips, and she again kissed him. However, this time, he felt her mouth open slightly, deepening the oral engagement. His fingers curled against her back, his arms tense while she ran her fingers along the outline of his sides.

    Tenchi’s thoughts were anything but clear. This gorgeous lady in his arms overtly desired him, had desired him for three years now, and in that time, he had grown to care deeply for her. Likewise, she had developed a genuine love for him, and this expression was natural.

    However, the Terran native gently broke the kiss and took a deep breath, calming his heart. Confused, Ryoko blinked and looked back at him.

    “What’s wrong?” she asked.

    “It’s…” he stated, unsure of his words. His brown eyes met the gold of hers, and the blush returned to his cheeks briefly with an embarrassed grin. “… It’s a bit fast, Ryoko.”

    “What do you mean?”

    The young man scratched the back of his head nervously, embarrassment still plain on his face.

    “I’m sorry. I’ve just… never…”

    The former space pirate furrowed her brows for a moment before the realization came to her. Tenchi sighed softly and glanced aside, but she kissed his cheek. His eyes slid back to her while she smiled warmly for him.

    “Tenchi, I’m well aware that you’re a virgin.”

    Her hand gently caressed his cheek.

    “… I’ll be gentle with you.”

    His fingers rested top the back of her hand.

    “I know… I just…”

    The prince closed his eyes, frustrated.

    “I love you, Ryoko,” he stated plainly. “I really do, and I…”

    He paused, his gaze returning to hers. She, however, could not completely hide the dejection in her face. She had waited for him to accept her, to love her, and now that he has, he kept her from sharing this side of herself with him.

    “I don’t want to mess this up,” he continued, honest and true. “I don’t want to rush this. When I was in school, I watched several of my classmates get sexual too fast.”

    Tenchi glanced aside, recalling one incident in particular. A good friend of his, Tsuchida Umanosuke, had been dating one of their classmates, Mizuno Sugano, for a full semester before their last term of classes. The couple would often be found making out on the roof of the junior wing, and their relationship seemed very close, even to a casual observer.

    However, during their last year, that fiery passion seemed die. Worried for his friend, Tenchi asked Umanosuke what happened, and he explained.

    “’We just burned out’,” Tenchi quoted to Ryoko.

    Taken aback, Ryoko blinked while her beloved continued, “That’s what Umanosuke told me, that he and Sugano just ‘burned out’ too fast. He said it was exciting at first, but that it just died.”

    She glanced down in thought, considering this. Her gut twisted at the idea of her blazing desire for Tenchi just snuffing itself like that. In times past, she would have immediately blurted out, “That’ll never happen!” or “Don’t you love me, Tenchi?” Now, her mind took pause and contemplated this more.

    “I don’t want that to be us,” he added.

    “Tenchi,” she started, her eyes returning to his, “I don’t want to lose you either, and I want to be close to you.”

    “That’s the point, Ryoko,” he said as a blush crossed his face. “It’s not like I…” He paused, a silly grin only adding to his embarrassed blush. “… don’t want to…”

    She smiled to herself while he concluded, “But, I want to love all of you, Ryoko, not just your body.”

    The former pirate had always been ruled by her impulses, and since she met Masaki Tenchi, her very being has wanted to be with him. Though she was disappointed and felt some rejection, part of her was also flattered.

    “Alright, Tenchi,” the Ryoan answered. “We’ll ‘go slow’.” Her hand cupped his cheek, a mischievous grin arcing across her lips. “But, these lips right here…” Lightly, her finger traced along his mouth, circling the cusp on each. “… They’re still mine.”

    With that, she kissed him lightly twice before the couple embraced, letting the kiss deepen on its own. Gently, Tenchi cradled her neck in his hand, leaving the other to draw her close at the waist. Ryoko’s arms draped over his shoulders, her palms pulling his head down toward her.

    After a few moments, the kiss broke, though the lady quickly stole two more quick pecks. Tenchi blinked at this, but Ryoko simply winked and replied, “I was a pirate, after all.”

    “Well, I do owe you a date,” he said, a wry smile on his face.

    Her forehead rested against his. “You certainly do.”

    Together, the couple strode back down to the Masaki house, discussing what they would do that evening. Tenchi initially suggested that the two attend a movie. There, they could enjoy the film, and each other’s company, without anyone staring at Ryoko’s alien features. At this, Ryoko shook her head.

    “Good movies don’t come out in October,” she argued. “Even then, anything worth watching won’t hit until Halloween at best.”

    Her idea, on the other hand, was to dance the night away at a local club. The young man was hesitant, until she outlined the particular details.

    “Tenchi, people go to clubs for a few reasons. Either they go to show off and get a date, or they go to show off the date they have.” She smirked and added, “A ‘cosplayer’ wouldn’t be new, I don’t think.”

    He considered it, but ultimately conceded, with one condition. The prince requested that she wear her hair down at least to mask a few of her alien attributes. The lady agreed to this, and he found himself opposite her on the floor of “Planet Dance”, bombarded by strobe lights and loud trance music.

    Ryoko was completely right. She melted into the atmosphere very well, particularly in the black dress she wore. The scarlet seam that spiraled up her body fluoresced under the few black lights mounted in the room. Her cyan hair, now smoothed down around her shoulders, stretched down her back to her waist. Her follicles too glowed in the unseen luminance, not unlike those who had dyed their hair.

    As the bass blasted around them, Ryoko guided Tenchi onto the floor and quickly found the rhythm. She shook from side to side, her hands beckoning her man to join her. Needless to say, the “country boy” in him became immediately evident as he stiffly tried to match her steps. Twice, he bumped into two other young people, resulting in the young prince’s embarrassment. The Ryoan woman laughed to herself as he tried to apologize to them, even as they blended back into the undulating mass around them.

    Tenchi nervously scratched his head while Ryoko strode up to the young prince, taking his hand. She lead him aside, speaking over the loud music.

    “Don’t worry about it. It happens all the time.”

    “Sorry, Ryoko,” he answered. “I never really learned to dance.”

    With a grin, she shook her head. “Oh, you did. Your grandpa just never told you.”

    Tenchi’s brows furrowed as his date slid back into the other attendants. Her catlike form slunk into a familiar stance, her hands before her, her front leg drawn up slightly. The crowd slowly began to notice her standing amongst them when the disc jockey changed the music. A solo heavy bass pounded as the cyan-maned woman glided forward. Tenor and alto synthesizer tones wrapped and knitted around the central driving line when her arms swayed to either side.

    Again, Tenchi knew this routine. He and she had practiced it ad nauseum before the dark goddess’s advent, but never so slow, or as elegant. Where fierce knife-handed strikes would have broken an opponent’s wrist, she arched her hand back toward her cheek and neck, curling her fingers with the chords’ embrace. Where a kick would have swung at her foe, she instead held her leg for a moment and hotly eyed her beloved, before easing her toes again to the ground. She softened it all, using all she had learned from Katsuhito and her own talent at deception, all to claim Tenchi’s undivided attention.

    Ryoko grinned to herself as she spun toward him, her hand extended.

    It’s your turn, Tenchi, she thought to herself.

    Dumbfounded at her performance, a moment passed before the country boy stepped forward. The music shifted again, a countermelody rose from the tenor line, interweaving with the theme established by the alto. Step by step, Tenchi and Ryoko circled one another, all the crowd watching, the two melodies starting to crescendo.

    The chorus broke forth as the two slid at one another and shifted together, close and tight. He would snake his arms around her, but she would slip away, her eyes always locked on his. She would spin her foot at his, and he would jump aside. Ferociously, the couple ensnared and eluded one another, endlessly attacking and countering in a smooth flow. On they went as the melodic lines blended into one, alto and tenor trading the theme off to one another.

    Then, Tenchi and Ryoko’s hands touched, their fingers wed as the song slowed, now unison. Their breath heaved slowly, their hearts beating within their chests, their eyes ablaze at one another. Ryoko relished this look from him, drawing his arms around her.

    That’s the lion-hearted man I love, she thought as they embraced and swayed.

    The crowd stood amazed and soon applauded, bringing a familiar reddish tint to Tenchi’s face. His date merely grinned to herself and kissed his lips. The press of her mouth quickly thrust the rest of the world away from her partner’s mind, leaving only the pair of them.

    In the darkened club, the other attendees gradually returned to their own dancing as the music returned to its speedy pace, leaving the young couple to themselves. As the night carried into the very early hours of the morning, the two would take the dance floor a few more times, Ryoko teaching Tenchi the etiquette and a few moves. However, these moves never caught the rug on fire like that first “sparring match”. The evening ended with them walking up the steps to the Masaki estate, arm in arm, laughing about their night. With one last lingering and deep kiss, Tenchi bid Ryoko good night as he retired to bed.

    Ryoko, however, did not head immediately to bed. The former pirate took a deep breath, still feeling her boyfriend’s lips on hers. She saw his door and thought about how feeble an impediment it was. She could phase right through it. She could destroy it with a gesture.

    Yet, she shook those thoughts away and floated up through the roof. There, the Ryoan woman sat on the corner of the red tile as she had so many times before.

    I’m impatient, she chided herself. Even the old man said so a while back.

    She folded her arms and looked up at the silver moon looming overhead. The feeling of his arms around him filled her thoughts, part of her aching for that closeness again.

    Still, she thought, he did cut loose.

    Her lips curled into a grin. His hands did draw her close. His fingers did wed with hers. None of that was coerced or forced. All of it was him.

    That’s a start.

    Now, she gazed out at the moon from within this Italian restaurant, thinking back on the last four weeks of their relationship. The pale light reflected off the Great Seto Bridge, much as it did off the Golden Gate Bridge that last night in her ideal world.

    There’s far less excitement and danger in this life, she thought.

    They had agreed to alternate choosing the evening’s entertainment, and tonight was Tenchi’s turn. While she liked to frequent the clubs, he liked a quiet night at dinner, or even at home with the rest of the household. The cyan-maned woman enjoyed showing off her boyfriend in public, how they moved together and held each other close.

    In contrast, the young prince preferred to find a private place for the two of them to have time alone, uninterrupted. Recent nights had found them both laying across Tenchi’s bed, in one another’s arms. He had become more forward with her, a change that she welcomed, but between the kisses and heated words, he asked her questions she had never been asked.

    “What’s your dream, Ryoko?”

    Caught off-guard, she responded, “What do you mean?”

    “You know, what do you want to do in the future?” He grinned wryly. “I mean, you’re already famous… well, sorta.”

    Ryoko glanced down, blinking her amber eyes. In all her harrowing adventures, that question had never been asked of her, not once. Her finger twirled Tenchi’s rat-tail while her gaze trailed back up to his.

    “True. What’s yours, Tenchi?”

    His brown eyes glanced aside for a moment and replied, “Hmm … how about becoming a world famous painter?”

    She pursed her lips and raised a brow. “Seriously? You want to be a painter?”

    “Well, something like that. I can’t leech off Dad and Grandpa forever.”

    The future had always been a black void to Ryoko for much of her life. As a space pirate, she lived from caper to caper, just avoiding the GP and other rival pirates. That excitement had fueled her, that adrenaline rush absolutely addictive. Her one wish for years was to live her life fast and bright, taking everything that she could whenever she could.

    The young woman had taken that question, among others, and been rolling them around in her mind for the past few days. As she now looked at the bridge, she broke the silence between herself and Tenchi softly and thoughtfully.

    “I don’t know what I want, Tenchi.”

    The prince raised a brow. “… But, we already ordered, Ryoko.”

    She sighed and rolled her eyes. “No, not about dinner. I mean ‘in life’.”

    Tenchi watched as her golden gaze lowered. Her cyan hair fell smooth around her head, framing her face while she spoke, reflectively.

    “I’ve wanted lots of things in my life: money, men, sake…” She grinned to herself, adding, “I’ve always been a bit greedy.”

    Tenchi chuckled, “I can’t disagree with that, really.” Then, he smile warmly and continued, “But, you have changed over the time I’ve known you.”

    She turned her eyes back to him, a slight smile forming on her lips.

    “Tenchi, part of me is a pirate, and it always will be.” Her head motioned toward the cash register as she whispered, “I’ll always think about phasing my hand through that plastic thing and taking the cash.” Her hand waved to nearby the door and windows. “I’ll always look for the quickest way out.”

    He took her hand in his and nodded. “I realize that, Ryoko, but you haven’t done any of that. You might have thought about it, but you didn’t do it. That shows that you’ve changed.”

    Her fingers wrapped around his as she raised her eyes to his, certainty prominent in his expression.

    “When you’re a pirate, you never think about much more than the next caper, at least I didn’t.”

    “Your dad did, I think,” Tenchi countered, taking Ryoko aback. “Or else, you wouldn’t be here.”

    She smiled distantly. “Maybe. I never knew him. He was killed in a GP raid before I was even born.”

    “And, your mom took you to Jurai’s territory.”

    “Yeah,” she laughed humorlessly. “To get away from the ‘pirate life’ that killed him. Some good that did.”

    “You’re out of it now,” he said hopefully. “There’s a Terran saying, Ryoko. ‘You can take the boy out of the country, but you can’t take the country out of the boy’.” He motioned to himself. “Part of me will always be the kid from the Okayama countryside, no matter where I travel in this galaxy.”

    The former pirate listened to him speak, unsure of herself. She hated that feeling, and it was becoming more prevalent as she thought more about her own purpose.

    “I don’t really know what I’ll end up doing either,” he said honestly, “but I keep trying to figure it out.” His fingers gently squeezed her palms. “And, I know you can too.”

    She smiled warmly while he added, “And, I don’t think it will be robbing banks.”

    “You so sure?” Ryoko asked, some humor returning to her voice, leaning toward her date.

    He nodded, leaning toward her. “I’ll make sure of it.”

    Her fingers slid over his palms as she glanced at his lips and back to his eyes. However, before she could kiss him, the waiter returned holding a tray of freshly cooked food. Promptly, the couple pulled back into their seats for their server to place their dinner upon the table, Tenchi apologizing.

    Yet, after the waiter left, Ryoko quickly stole a kiss on his lips. The prince grinned and shook his head while she smiled to herself.

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    How are Ayeka and Washu after being lost by the MiB? Tenchismile

    Tenchi Muyo! vs. Men in Black – Chapter 3, Part 2

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    I’ve been rewatching one of my favorite series, Tekkaman Blade, which shares some DNA with Tenchi Universe. Also, it is a rebooted version of the Tatsunoko superhero series Tekkaman: the Space Knight. At episode 22, the audience finally sees the first female Tekkaman, Rapier, in action. Here is her transformation sequence, which is not much different than her older brother’s.

    Although Tekkaman Blade is a blatantly shonen series, does Tekkaman Rapier count as a “magical girl”? <.<

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    JGZinv wrote:

    I’m sure someone here will correct me on something somewhere, but heck we don’t get super posts all that often anymore.

    Remember. You asked for this. gendo1

    JGZinv wrote:

    So during the Ohayocon trip we went back to our rent-a-house and ending up

    having a impromptu Tenchi 101 class if you will, of which, it’s entirely too complicated to try and explain the vast Tenchi multiverse, and what pertains to what.


    Admittedly, a lot of material exists for the series, though it can mostly be sorted by author or director. After seeing OVA Series 1 or Universe, most stand-alone works are fairly accessible.

    Almael wrote:

    Couldn’t you turn the information into some sort of timeline diagram like the one I did and reduce it to the elementary ideas introduced by each instance? I know it would be big but gives an easier quicker and more useful overview.


    mitsuki lover wrote:

    I agree with Almael, a time line would have been nice to try to understand everything.

    Done. butts1 I left out all the Pretty Sammy series since they are mostly their own animal, except to show that as a whole, they branch from the Mihoshi Special. Except for the publication dates for the Hasegawa novels, which I got from our beneficent Nil Admirari, all information here comes from ANN directly.

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    Now, as to the content of the original post, I will address a few issues.

    JGZinv wrote:

    3rd. Tenchi Muyo! Mihoshi Special OVA (circa 1994) (Tenchi Dimension events as told by Mihoshi’s warped brain using TM characters)

    The cast is bored at the house and complains that Mihoshi is a has-been GP officer. Mihoshi recounts her awesome partner Kiyone and their amazing feats in the GP using the Tenchi cast. Pretty Sammy and Kiyone (green haired, not Tenchi’s mother Kiyone) are introduced here. Some consider it non-canon, it’s very much a comedy. I would consider it canon because there’s too much tie in with Dual/PS coming up again. But it’s a one off that was never discussed again, and Kiyone was retconned out of the OVA with Noike in OVA 3.


    The Mihoshi Special is not part of Kajishima’s view of anything. Except for being credited as “original creator”, which is meaningless to the actually producing the work, Kajishima’s name is nowhere on the production as noted on ANN. Hell, the screenwriter also wrote most of the episodes in Universe, and Hayashi himself is credited as both executive producer and story concept. If one uses the same reasoning that you used to lump Ai Tenchi with Universe, the Mihoshi Special should belong with Universe. Honestly, this is a side-story and does not fit very well with any of the mainline continuities.

    JGZinv wrote:

    8th. Tenchi Muyo: War on Geminar (circa 2009) (Photon’s Alternate Dimension, based on char/events from Tenchi OVA Dimension)

    Tenchi’s half brother, created from the union of Tenchi’s father and Rea (from the wedding special released after/as part of OVA 3) is sent to the world of Geminar by Washu and the other Chousin. There he basically establishes himself as a bad-ass young boy as he’s been trained since birth in the Tenchi household. He ends up becoming a mecha pilot and indentured aide to Princess Lashara in the midst of a hostile takeover. The series draws very heavily on Photon lore, Tenchi, and some Dual.

    Largely this series was a hit with fans, but it fell on it’s face because a ton of money was spent as every episode was a OVA 45 min small movie. Very very little backstory is given for Kenshi, but a huge amount was covered in the doujinshi and novels in Japan. Some of which both pre and post series, you might prefer not to know.


    Where does either Geminar or Photon ever reference the other? I see names being recycled, and Kajishima’s concepts rarely change from project to project. In fact, as I recall, the name “Geminar” is never spoken in either series, so except from marketing, how does the viewer know they are related? If the answer is “doujinshi”, I refer you back to my exchange with AstroNerdBoy about official merchandise.

    JGZinv wrote:

    The Hiroshi Negishi Universe:

    Negishi directed and worked alongside Kajishima to produce the Tenchi TV or aka as the USA got it “Tenchi Universe” series.


    This is false. Negishi never met Kajishima until after Ai Tenchi concluded in 2014 as evidenced from his Twitter feed at the time. Moreover, look at the staff for Universe on ANN. Kajishima is again only listed as original character designer and original plan, nothing else. Interestingly, Kajishima is credited as a supervising animation director for TM!iL2.

    JGZinv wrote:

    2nd. Tenchi Muyo in Love 1 [Movie]

    A evil space being sealed away in the GXP headquarters…


    There is no “X” in “GP”, the abbreviation for the “Galaxy Police”. Observe their flag for reference.

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    JGZinv wrote:

    3rd. Tenchi Muyo in Love 2: Tenchi Forever [Movie]

    Ayeka and Ryoko finally demand Tenchi choose and he runs off into the forest near the shrine, only to be sucked up by a tree there. Everyone looks for Tenchi for months but he is gone. Tenchi has been whisked away to a inner dimension created by the spirit of Yosho’s dead lover he left for earth with, but she died before landing. She and Tenchi live in a dream world set in the future where they two are lovers living together, while Tenchi is studying to become a painter. As Haruka’s…


    Her name is “Haruna”.

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    JGZinv wrote:

    4th. Tenchi Muyo TMiL 2: Eternal Memory [Manga]

    This is kinda sorta canon to TMiL, but no one is 100% sure if it is to be taken seriously. It details what Sasami was up to for large portions of TMiL2, going to Jurai and asking of Tsunami (not before seen in humanoid form). She also meets another young character and ends up asking Tenchi to stay with her forever, to which he replies in his “half-joking to a child way” sure! Sasami takes that as a marriage proposal and says she’ll wait for him forever till she’s grown and will capture his heart then.

    There’s no real trustworthy source for a Eternal Memory translation, it was actually abused and turned into a farce for a long time. It plays out more like a chunk of Pretty Sammy, set to TMiL 2 as the backdrop. So your mileage may vary, I’d just say ignore it honestly as it just muddles the waters if you’re a Ryoko or Ayeka fan.


    Considering the Punistation parody is dubious at best, it might be best not to take what she wrote with any credence. Our dear Chaud has started working on a translation, and I would be more interested in what he finds than what is currently assumed about the manga.

    JGZinv wrote:

    5th. ??? Ai Tenchi Muyo! (circa 2014)

    The reason Ai goes with the Negishi Universe, despite the obvious creator ties, is that of the various Tenchi projects, Ai seems to draw from Universe the most. It’s not explicitly stated it’s part of Universe, and it even seems to oddly draw some from the OVA. So it’s not 100% clear where it falls, or if it should just be a stand alone creation, which is how most fans treat it.


    Ai Tenchi Muyo! is not part of Universe‘s timeline, or the OVA timeline, or any other. It was heralded as a “celebration of the franchise” by Negishi and the publicists at AIC+. It pulls references from just about every incarnation of the series preceding it, either using their ideas or poking fun at itself. For reference, check Negishi’s Twitter from above, as well as all the links and discussion in its own sub-forum.

    JGZinv wrote:

    5th. ??? Ai Tenchi Muyo! (circa 2014)

    Hi-jinks ensue, mostly with the girls of the school nearly raping him on several occasions.


    You exaggerate. Please rewatch the series at the convenient YouTube link provided here.

    JGZinv wrote:

    He tried to work with Kajishima who was brought in for an interview, who reportedly was rude and would barely talk to Negishi.


    This is false. As stated earlier, Negishi did not meet with Kajishima until after Ai Tenchi concluded.

    JGZinv wrote:


    Later the Ai backlash from Japanese fans, was used against Negishi, to remove him doing more to fix it (a movie was discussed), and he left Tenchi in utter disgust, feeling betrayed. He would later pop up doing a Saber Marionette continuation. Time passed and we found out the reigns to Tenchi were handed back to Kajishima to do with as he pleased (OVA 4).


    On Twitter, Negishi did say he left AIC+ to pursue other projects and that the production was returning to the “OVA mindset”. He has talked about Saber Marionette as well as releasing a blu-ray of Tekkaman Blade. However, where did he say anything about “backlash”, his “utter disgust”, or feeling “betrayed”?

    JGZinv wrote:

    The Tenchi in Tokyo Universe:

    Tenchi in Tokyo was another spin off unto it’s own. Interestingly it wasn’t always meant to be that way, as the fandom discovered artwork that proved it was originally intended to be an extension of Tenchi Universe. Alas, it was changed along the line to become it’s own thing. Tenchi decided to move to Tokyo to undergo training so he can more properly take care of the family shrine and get some peace to himself as his mountain home is already besieged with alien women. Of course this turns the dynamic on it’s head and everyone has to get used to it (or not). It doesn’t help that nearly Tenchi’s first day in Tokyo he meets Sakuya and starts falling for her. Of course she’s a shadow clone (believe it!) of a space psychic girl that was sealed away by a queen of Jurai, and now she’s out for revenge. All the major histories are jumbled up again, like Washu is just a hired accomplice to Ryoko, and Ayeka and Yosho are no longer Juraian royalty.


    No, Ayeka is still a the first princess of Jurai. Kamidake addresses her as such in the first episode.

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    On the other hand, Yosho does not exist in the series. Tenchi and his grandfather Katsuhito have been recast as a lineage of guardians for Earth, severing the direct tie to Jurai.

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    I would invite you to rewatch the series with a fresh perspective, viewing its own merits and storyline. I aim to do this myself in the near future, as well as firing up the speculation and theory machine again. woooo1

    JGZinv wrote:


    Ryoko trying to be less pirate-y for Tenchi,


    For a time, one can argue that, but then he broke her heart. She left the planet and showed why she was a feared space pirate, something the other series have never really shown.

    JGZinv wrote:


    It really is the black sheep of the family, although Ai is now taking most of the heat.


    At this point, I would disagree with this assessment. Lots of Twitter comments, as well as comments on the subtitled version on YouTube, have been positive for Ai Tenchi. Also, considering the split in the fandom caused by OVA series 3 and the doujinshi following it, I would argue many fans would rank Tokyo above OVA series 3.

    JGZinv wrote:

    The Hasegawa Universe:

    Naoko Hasegawa was a scriptwriter for several of the initial Ryo-Ohki OVA episodes,


    She was responsible for the screenplay of OVA series 1 as stated on ANN, not just “several episodes”. Moreover, if you check her C.V., she also wrote the screenplay for Midsummer’s Eve/Daughter of Darkness and an episode of Universe, to say nothing of her other works. Notably, she writes strong female characters, such as Naomi Armitage from Armitage Dual-Matrix.

    JGZinv wrote:


    Why they decided to release the 10th book as a movie, which barely stands on its own, no one really knows. They were probably desperate for content, and Japan being Japan, was much more familiar with the other book content.


    I disagree about AIC being “desperate” for content. As you just stated, Hasegawa had ten novels out at the time, so the executives could have chosen any of her works to produce a film. Moreover, by the end 1996, Okuda had produced five volumes worth of content. They were not short of anything.

    I also disagree that the film “barely stands on its own”. At this point, Tenchi had had two OVA series, two TV series, and a theatrical movie. The audience attending the film would know enough about the characters and mythos to understand the story, just like TM!iL1. While having Makibi Kiyone present might be a surprise for those strictly following the OVA, she had already been present in both TV series and the previous film.

    I personally showed some friends OVA series 1 and immediately followed with Midsummer’s Eve, and with a few explanations about a new house and Makibi Kiyone’s appearance, the movie went fine. I would argue that watching OVA series 1 and reading Hexagram would be enough to introduce someone to Midsummer’s Eve.

    JGZinv wrote:


    …Funaho and Kiyone play bigger roles.


    Funaho, both the woman and the tree, are never mentioned in Hexagram. On the other hand, Empress Misaki, the only empress mentioned in the book, does play a role in the novel’s events alongside her husband. Please take a moment to read the novel here on TenchiForum.

    JGZinv wrote:


    You can also see Hasegawa making some subtle jabs at Kajishima here and there.


    This is false. She does not reference any of Kajishima’s particular kinks in her story. She actually wrote apologetically to Kajishima in the afterword that she crammed the goddesses at the end of the story.

    JGZinv wrote:


    So Daughter of Darkness pretty much again starts with Yosho as a child on Jurai, and he befriends a little demon girl (or something, she’s more like a furry magic smurf) who’s brutally murdered by the Jurain guard. She pops back up and slaughters them all, only to be put down again.


    This is false, but that’s how I would write it. tuxedodouche Yuzuha is cut in half by a Juraian guard, but she does not die and flees crying. She slaughters no one in the opening scene. She does devour some of Yosho’s friends in a later flashback, but it predates the opening segment of the film. Here is a link to the entire film on YouTube for you to corroborate my claim.

    JGZinv wrote:


    The daughter fake is recaptured, fight ensues, stuff happens that doesn’t make sense, the demon is banished, and the daughter is turned into a gem that Washu can eventually allow to grow into a baby anew, and roll credits of the baby growing up happy.

    Make sense? No, didn’t think so. So that’s what you get for missing 9 books of back story.


    What doesn’t make sense? Yuzuha was in love with Yosho. Hell hath no fury as a woman scorned. Ayeka used a branch from the tree Funaho to charge Tenchi, who cut Yuzuha in half with the Light Hawk Sword. And, from what I can tell, Yuzuha is pretty dead. Please rewatch the movie. It is only an hour.

    JGZinv wrote:


    The Okuda Universe:The Okuda manga is pretty great in an of itself, it’s hilariously self aware, it takes big fat obvious sign holding jabs at Kajishima, it barrows from both the OVA and Universe, it manages to deal with very small personal stories and big galactic ones, while still giving you some arcs.


    Outside of the brief adaptations of Pretty Sammy and TM!iL1 in his first run, Okuda only uses the OVA. Take some time and read the manga and its sequel.

    JGZinv wrote:


    If you want to see the panel we held at…


    You mean the one we had at Chibi-Pa, where we were joined by Matt Miller (Tenchi) and Petrea Burchard (Ryoko)? Did you know that they read a segment of Hexagram aloud and in-character? WANT1 See it here!

    JGZinv wrote:


    Okay okay, one one more thing.

    For the sake of melting brains, I’ll try to unravel some of the Kajishima-verse lore.


    And, I’m going to stop you right there. While one can appreciate your goal of writing a viewing/reading guide to the Tenchi franchise, you have already given an outline of the series and a brief summary of each entry. I would like to think that a full blow-by-blow description of Kajishima’s universe would be unnecessary at this point. People can watch the shows and read what material has been translated, without spoon-feeding or hand-holding, or imposing existing dogma.

    Maybe they can form their own opinions and theories.

    Maybe they can even share them here on this forum. fyeah1

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    Quote:

    Idly, Jezibel Kimitan watched the sparring match below. As she reclined slightly to the side of her seat, her jade eyes followed the blond Nerti Ro dodging and striking at her male adversary, her instructor. The man’s spikes of green hair barely slipped from the hook of her wooden scythe as he spun the length of his spear at her legs. His feline amber eyes followed his student as she ducked and rolled to the side, soon regaining her footing, weapon held ready. He stepped back, taking a defensive posture, drawing his spear’s length slowly along his free hand, observing her closely, his elfin ears listening intently for her next attack.

    Jezibel, however, yawned. Such physical conflict bored her when no blood was shed. She loosened her control on Nerti during these practice sessions, letting the girl’s subconscious and analytical faculties learn from the exchanges while keeping her free will suppressed. In so doing, the blond young woman could neither rebel against instructions nor flee from the influence of the Kimitan witch. Nerti was simply a caged bird, singing on command, in preparation for the great chorus to come.

    Yet, the bird’s talons were growing quite sharp as shown by how her instructor sweated in the next exchange. Her blunt weapon swooped close to his neck twice, only narrowly dodged or deflected. Her physical training was nearly complete, and the next phase would commence soon.

    Jezibel did smirk to herself as she thought of giving the girl a slight nudge, to be more aggressive, to slay her opponent.

    How entertaining would that bout be? she asked herself.

    Before she could consider this scheme any further, an alert flashed on the arm of her seat. Her lip curled at the annoyance while she lightly tapped the alert icon. In front of her, a translucent rectangle appeared, displaying the insectoid face of the caller. While his visage was twisted and stretched by the genetic treatment, Jezibel recognized Illirg’s compound eyes and the eager loyalty they expressed.

    “Mission report, your highness,” the creature’s voice grunted with a vaguely male tone.

    Jezibel grinned to herself. Controlling a bug seemed very easy since they already were genetically predisposed to following orders. Their biological hierarchy demanded that a worker caste like Illirg submit to any member of the royalty class, such as the queen. All Jezibel needed do was supplant the image of the queen in his primordial brain with her own, and dominance immediately resulted. While the genetic treatment administered by Nerti made his body exhibit traits of the royal and soldier castes, his brain remained purposefully unchanged to ensure his loyalty. Now, he would obey any command, suffer any wound, only to earn the telepath’s favor. Moreover, she did not even need to be in close proximity to maintain her sway over him.

    “Very well,” she replied. “Make your report.”

    “As instructed, I have arrived on Earth. The active cloak prevented even the Arquillian battle cruiser from detecting my approach.”

    “Good,” the Kimitan witch answered. “I assume then that you are on the planet’s surface.”

    “I am, royalty,” he stated before adding, “but an issue has come up.”

    “Oh?” she inquired, a brow rising with her interest.

    “While I flew unnoticed with the Arquillian ship, I sighted a Ryoan Ohki-class organic ship coming from the planet.”

    A smile stretched across Jezibel’s lips.

    Ryo-Ohki, yes?” she asked, already knowing the answer.

    “Yes, your excellency,” he answered. “As you commanded, I shot her down while the Arquillians fired on Earth.”

    While the galaxy at large heard conflicting accounts of Ryoko’s demise on Jurai, some interested parties knew well that she had survived. Though she could have fled back to the pirate guilds of her home-world, she instead flew to Earth, following her heart’s desire.

    And, a heart full of desire is fertile ground for the seeds of corruption, Jezibel reminded herself. All as my Lady has foreseen.

    “Well done, Illirg,” Jezibel praised. “This changes your targets’ priority. Be sure to have the ‘seed’ ready when you encounter Ryoko.”

    “I will, my queen.”

    “Carry on.”

    With a wave of her hand, the communication screen vanished, ending the call. Pleased, she smiled widely. While Liaens thought only of his conquest of Jurai, Jezibel had far larger aspirations in mind.

    Should Illirg fail, she reminded herself, he will still have purpose in acquiring the pirate.

    Meanwhile, the mutated bug lightly slid his claws down a cylindrical container. Within its transparent walls, a black flame writhed and flickered, burning higher as Illirg approached. Against the wall nearest to the insect, the flames pressed against the surface and mimicked a face, smiling knowingly back at him. Marked simply as “II”, the container was one of a pair, the other empty and marked “III”.

    “Anything for my queen,” Illirg reiterated.

    Tenchi Muyo! vs Men in Black – Chapter 3, Part 1

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    Chaud posted this beautiful scan not too long ago.

    ChaudSept wrote:


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    It looks like young Yosho ^^

    That certainly does. soawesome1

    Ukinojo92 wrote:


    The Yosho picture was unexpected and possible cut from the movie or just for the novel. Pii is going to love making theories on that picture.


    You’re right. I am, and I did. badass1 Moreover, I’m pleased to see that I wasn’t far off the mark. gendo1

    I read Ukinojo’s very rough translation of Chapter 4 from the TM!iL1 novelization, and I found the story exactly the kind of gem I hoped would be in a book version of the film. The segment briefly describes Katsuhito walking through his home with Achika, peeking at Ryoko and Ayeka while they sleep. He notes that neither belong amongst the usual high school crowd. Basking in the moonlight, he reminisces about an event from his childhood on Jurai.

    Yosho’s father, presumably the emperor of Jurai at the time, has a lesson to teach the young prince, of sacrifice for the greater good. The man leads the boy to a tomb deep in the palace, where a lone tree stands vigil. As with all royal trees, this one has a long memory, and through it, Yosho watches the battle between Kain and a Juraian emperor since passed. Though the emperor could have chosen to protect only his own lands, he chose to yield his life to save many others from a horrible monster’s massacre.

    I really like this story, and it answers some questions I have always had. Consider who Katsuhito is in TM!iL1. A generation before, he had been crown prince, a lineal descendent of the Jurai king. As an educated man, he would surely know about other races of the galaxy, such as Ryoko, and certainly recognize a woman of noble descent, like Ayeka. Perhaps seeing them here is why he tolerates them when they arrive 26 years later. Moreover, if Kain was such a monster, he would not doubt have heard the story at some point in his life.

    Given the ability of a Jurai tree to display the content of her memory, this segment gives a first-hand account of the first defeat of Kain, which is only mentioned in vague flashbacks and hushed tones in the film. Also, framing it as a lesson to the prince endears it to the man Yosho would grow to become, and the king he might have been.

    However, the film never addresses either issue, focusing mainly on Achika’s story. Truthfully, since Katsuhito plays little role in the film, omitting his suspicions or knowledge does not detract from the film’s storytelling. I would estimate the scene was dropped due to pacing or some other such reason. Still, seeing it animated would have been a treat too. Tenchismile

    Ukinojo and Chaud, thanks for providing and translating this segment. You made my day. kiyonesmile1

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    ChaudSept wrote:


    The table of contents often help us to know what’s inside the novel.

    目次

    Table of contents

    プロ ローグ

    Prologue

    第1章 19才 •真夏の恋

    Chapter 1…… 19 years old – Midsummer’s Love

    第2章 17才• 不在の夏

    Chapter 2…… 17 years old – No summer

    第3章 19才• 不安な夢

    Chapter 3……19 years old – Anxiety Dream

    第4章 17才• 空白の足跡

    Chapter 4……17 years old – Blank Footprints

    第5章 17才• 消息の糸口

    Chapter 5……17 years old – New clues

    第6章 もぅひとつの19才

    Chapter 6……Another 19 years old

    第7章 19才• 17才との対面

    Chapter 7…… 19 years old – Meeting with a 17 years old

    第8章 17才• 未来の奪回

    Chapter 8……17 years old – The Future’s rescue

    第9章 19才• 燃えつきる、永遠の夏

    Chapter 9 ……19 years old – Burning out, Eternal Summer

    第10章 17才• 秋。新しい未来へ

    Chapter 10……17 years old – To a New Future

    エピローグ

    Epilogue

    あとがきにかえて

    Afterword

    ChaudSept wrote:

    But I wonder what it means, the novel seems to be seperated into parts where the characters’s ages are fluctuating between 19 ans 17 yo…

    Maybe 19 means we follow Tenchi, and 17 means we follow Ayeka & Ryoko.


    I replied to this in November, but I will give a more detailed reply. The high points of the story are as follows.

  • The film opens with Yosho and Haruna approaching Earth aboard his ship, visually similar to Funaho from the OVA.

  • Ryoko and Ayeka fight over chores when Tenchi intervenes. They turn their attention to him and ask him finally to choose between them. He escapes into the forests, where Haruna’s ghost then draws him into her fantasy.
  • Six months pass, and the Masaki household has scattered across the galaxy to find Tenchi.
  • Tenchi awakes, visibly older and more like Yosho, in an apartment with his supposed girlfriend, Haruna.

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  • Elsewhere, Sasami uses Jurai’s arboretum network, yet another visual cue from the OVA, to search for Tenchi. Ryoko and Ayeka briefly see Tenchi in the crowded city, but lose him in the chase.
  • Tenchi sketches Haruna by the moonlight and spend the night like young lovers.

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  • Katsuhito discovers Haruna’s camellia has blossomed and realizes what has actually happened.
  • Haruna meets with Tenchi after class, and they head home together in the rain. Ryoko and Ayeka spot him walking with Haruna but once more lose him in the alleys of the city. Seeing Haruna only distresses the pair more, Ayeka cracking and Ryoko emotionally turning off.
  • Meanwhile, Haruna finds a sketch Tenchi made, of a cyan-maned woman. She tears it down and crumples it, leaving Tenchi to demand why she did it. However, her tears spur him to placate her by shopping, buying a pair of matching rings. At the same time, Ryoko and Ayeka are working when the two worlds briefly converge, allowing them to see Tenchi and Haruna in their diner. Ryoko and Ayeka try to reach him but are unable to speak to him or even touch him. However, Haruna reacts to them both, clearly aware of them. Haruna then vanishes along with Tenchi.

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  • Sasami hears the tale of Haruna from the knights and relays it to Washu. She, in turn, explains the parallel world issue to Ryoko and Ayeka, making a plan to break into the other world.

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  • Again, Tenchi sketches Ryoko’s visage, but he hides the sketch before Haruna can see it.
  • Washu confronts Katsuhito, who tells his tale to her, how he planted Haruna’s camellia on Earth after her death.

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  • Again, Haruna finds the Ryoko sketch and destroys it, spurring another spat between her and Tenchi.
  • Washu uses Kiyone and Mihoshi to implement her plan, teaming with Sasami on Jurai.
  • Frustrated, Tenchi finds the bankbook and sees the nonsensical figures. Finally, he has had enough lies and deception and states he can’t love her like this any more. Ryoko and Ayeka then break into the reality and confront her, but Haruna exiles both of them and resets the alternate world. Washu sends them right back, but Tenchi orders Ryoko and Ayeka away, so he can confront Haruna himself.

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  • Katsuhito finally decides to cut down Haruna’s tree and enter the other world as well to face Haruna. He forces her to remember her own final words.
  • Yosho’s spirit guides Haruna’s away, leaving Tenchi to be rescued by Ryoko.

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  • Tenchi is sketching in the hills when Ryoko joins him for a moment alone together.

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  • Looking at the table of contents, I could speculate as to how the chapters line-up, but I do not quite see how a couple of them align yet.

  • Chapter 1…… 19 years old – Midsummer’s Love — Yosho and Haruna arrive in orbit of Earth.

  • Chapter 2…… 17 years old – No summer — Tenchi disappears.
  • Chapter 3……19 years old – Anxiety Dream — Tenchi awakes in Haruna’s world.
  • Chapter 4……17 years old – Blank Footprints — Ryoko and Ayeka search fruitlessly for Tenchi.
  • Chapter 5……17 years old – New clues — Sasami hears about Haruna from the knights.
  • Chapter 6……Another 19 years old — ???
  • Chapter 7…… 19 years old – Meeting with a 17 years old — ???
  • Chapter 8……17 years old – The Future’s rescue — Ryoko and Ayeka break into Haruna’s world.
  • Chapter 9 ……19 years old – Burning out, Eternal Summer — Katsuhito cuts down Haruna’s camellia tree.
  • Chapter 10……17 years old – To a New Future — Ryoko brings Tenchi home.
  • I am sure translating a little of each chapter might place it more exactly. In the absence of evidence to the contrary, I am fairly convinced that the novelization is, more or less, the same order of events as the film. Moreover, I am fairly convinced that the 19/17 ages are to distinguish the two parallel timelines, not that someone is actually changing age between chapters.

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