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wwwwhhhhoooo wrote:
The first chapter was wonderful! You’ve got a real knack for crafting a narrative in such a way as to make it feel very authentic to the characters we’re all familiar with. Every line of character dialogue I read, I could hear that character saying the lines in my head. Kiyone, Ryoko Washu Tenchi… I could hear Matt Miller or K T Vogt saying those lines! & I could definitely picture the plot to this chapter as an episode in Universe. Very well done, thank you for sharing.
Thank you for the kind comments
Glad to hear I got the characters right. I suppose it makes It easier by having a small amount of their personalities within you. Well maybe not as.. Dense as Mihoshi or Tenchi lol. I’d say Kiyone is the hardest to do because she’s a little bit mysterious and not a clear personality like the others.
The plot changes after the 3rd. Drastically in the 5th, so let’s see what you say then about it clearly fitting in Universe
It’s embarrassing to re read that chapter after so long. Wow have I changed. Nowadays I’ve cut back on too much unnecessary descriptive wording. Cant say the 2nd is better off. Still, haven’t read that in a while. Hope you enjoy the 2nd chapter too on there!
Got it saved in my mumble servers. Don’t be suprised if an English woman pops along 
nice! May drop by sometimeSilverWhisper wrote:No problem. Is that the full image?
http://apple-kitty.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/dw25c3 No one is allowed to see un watermarked image, and atm I don’t have one. So this will have to do
Just to be perfectly clear I did not draw it. I just designed her.
Thanks for the welcome all Now you can see my Evil Kiyo all the time as my avvy :washu:
