shadowmann2330

for one i will be instigating a new feature, i intend to add photos of ships/other large scale objects under a spoiler button at the bottom of the page.

as for your lack of knowledge in the freespace(no spaces in freespace){lol} department, its not very critical that you need to know about freespace ot get a feel for this fiction, simply beacuse the ailen race known as the shivans is never explained beyond their miltaristic power. nothing about their society as a whole is EVER revealed, making it a basic template for my daily daydreams.

and as a result of 21 years of staring out the window, i have successfully created a sensible shivan society.

i cannot reveal much now but rest assured that all will be explained in due time, particuarly in the next act i wil explain much further into the story.

i truly do appretiate your honesty WHO and i hope that your critice grows as does my fanfiction abilitys.

i will fix act one now……

and bay now i mean tommmowar when i have moar scrumpey

…im…gonata lick ya………………. :fight: