Feel free to read it if you want but i’ll tell you now she isn’t a Saiyan in it. Honestly though, even if she was she would never get to SSJ, she would not put in the years of training and toil to get there … or luck out and apparently be born that way like the half Saiyan children.
Also remember, Ryoko does have a ‘tail’ ( be it accessory in the Tenchiverse) so the only transforming she’d be doing as a Saiyan would be into an Oozaru
Ok after postponing it for a few days i got round to reading it. First off the bat is with it being in screenwriting form it looks quite daunting to read as it is just one large block of text, that is why i have only just gotten around to reading it. Secondly i will have to echo what my master said, i don’t know how screenwriting should be set out but i just feel it is missing crucial details on the actions of the people, the setting and so on. You make the point that people who know the characters will know what is going on but i don’t think that is an excuse for missing out details.
All in all i like the story and it seems to be progressing well with the character’s dialogue being true and proper. I will continue reading this and am looking forward to how it turns out.
