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    Admittedly Bioware isnt exactly the best to its employees x.x

    and i have to say Leliana; although they are both awesome ^.^

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    Welcome to the forum man :Tenchismile: and ahh yes, i have another college course coming up myself so I have the same thing going on in a way

    Anyway man, enjoy your stay and feel free to talk Tenchi :sign:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    Personally, 5 and 6 were my favorite episodes of the ova; apart from 11 and 12. Although I love episode 8 and episode 4; the heartwrenching of episode 5’s ending that led into 6’s conflict then resolution, much like how it happens in 11 and 12. It brings in the way the show can be heartwrenching one second then be lighthearted and have a feel-good vibe to it. That’s just my personal take on it however.

    Don’t get me wrong, I loved all of the episodes of the OVA(apart from OVA 3) but out of them all, those are the particular ones that really struck home for me :Tenchismile:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    Ryoko Hakubi

    The infamous space pirate

    Loves a dull person

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    Here’s to hoping everyone has a safe and happy 4th of july ^.^ and for those who dont celebrate; you guys have an awesome day as well!

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    oh yes and happy anniversary of joining Ll :sign:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    I actually won’t be able to make it to this next one 😥 I will be out of town all weekend for a writing workshop. I’ll be sure to listen to it after its uploaded though ^.^
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    I must admit, as well as Who, that my story idea didn’t go as extensive as the Homecomings story. From reading the Escalation, I can also see that in the coming future, Ryoko/Tenchi’s son will have an interesting counterpart in his part to play for your story to come ^^

    I will read deep into what you’ve written Pii to see how it all plays out. Also, be sure to read into my OVA 4 as my 2nd generation story will come afterward.

    As for any new ideas of mine, Tenchi will have a daughter with Ryoko named Achika(as I think I’ve mentioned before) and a son with Ayeka that i still have to come up with a name(since he is the antagonist later on, i want to make it to where he has a known antagonist name) Yakage, Hishima? Perhaps a manga name coming from the name of the shadow blade “Kageba” (unless i decide to put that as a tool my OVA 4 villain wants to gain full power as well as restore his world ^^) Anyway with a start I had planned on the two children being very young; around five or six when the story begins. I had planned on them being trained in combat throughout the years, but each one takes on a different fighting style than the other. The daughter has a fighting style that is a much more robust and feral while the son has a classic swordsman style(with the exception of using shields and juraian blasts.) They each balance each other out in skill.

    Fast-forward about a year after WoG and they are around 15 or 16 at this point. There has been some conflict around the Juraian territory between a few planets and the two children are at this point wanting to head out on a mission to see what they can do(trying to follow in their father’s footsteps). After heated argument the two are allowed to go only because Tenchi, Ryoko, and Ayeka will accompany. During this, a cataclysm happens during the battle; a dimensional shift. Tenchi as well as the two kids’ mothers vanish, and the brother and sister are divided.

    I havent had a lot of thought into figuring up a scheme, but in investigation done by Achika, she finds out that the dimension they are in, is one that happened if the two had been captured before the big Empirical civil war. She comes to find out that the son, in fact, in all his small arguments as well as some corruption done by a villain, has sought out to do a deed that an old foe from the long gone past, originally planned. To merge his energy with the goddesses. Although I think it should be an ultimate scheme to get the overall antagonist his own power, and the son being merely a high quality pawn, the siblings will fight as they encounter each other. I plan on maybe having cameos come in but I’m not entirely sure.

    Anyway thats the rough idea i had for a story for now, at least until i can finish my OVA 4 and branch into this and make it mesh together and work. ^^

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    First and foremost. This was a very great screenwrite! The format was really well done, it had so much more than my rendition of the format had. I give kudos for being able to pull of the original format as well as you have ^.^.

    Secondly, I love the story you are bringing in. The whole idea of the 2nd generation has been passing around the forum for a few days and to see it in a way like this is quite a bit different than I had in mind. I mean, my idea was a branch-off of my OVA 4 once I finished it, but yours went with Universe which was a skillful approach; not only as the series so far surpasses The OVA (in my opinion) but having a close to done ending while letting room for any continuation be present, and being able to start a very interesting story from such an ending was a feat I never could have made.

    You pulled off the Time machine vibe that is very common to the Universe continuity very well. Along with bringing in these two kids. It makes for an intro that brings in a lot of questions, but thats EXACTLY how you are supposed to do it. Your intro should hook the reader/audience and bring them in to figure out more into what is happening.

    In terms of critique, only a few gramatical/spelling errors here and there but as you said you put it together in a short time, and it was still very skilled as a piece. If this was to be adapted to screentime, I would definitely watch this. I am eager to see what more is to come for the Masaki household in this new adventure! :D

    If you ever need any help or ideas, feel free to PM me or anything, and i can bounce off some ideas :Tenchismile:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    On a note, for the next Tenchicast. I have to make sure I am free for it still. There’s a chance i may need to head out of town for a week, but I will still try to make it to the next one ^.^
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
    shadowsfall0
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    Fan right here man! I do agree that the second Dragonage was missing so much from the first one in the exchange of awesome fighting. The length of the first one far surpassed the sequel as well. I’ve beaten them both and know that the first one left a better imprint for me. Kindof like when i played Dead Space, the first one is great and actually scary, but then the second one comes around and it just doesnt catch you as much.

    Any I’m digressing, but I am a big fan of Origins. Bioware has always been able to produce a great action RPG in my opinion and this game certainly proves that. :ghost:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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