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    nice trailer but there was nothing to go on waaaaaaaaaa
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    or washu depending on what story your going with but you chances of finding a hot space girl is 50-50
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    ha iloveit1
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    ookamilord
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    welcome
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    well for megumi i was aiming for an ogre like mother you see in most action/comedy anime. i tried to let the readers know the reason she acts this way was because she lost her baby during pregnancy and she is a little over protective but she has a hard time showing it without reliving the loss of her baby. my original intent for cody’s human parents were that they really didnt want a child but to keep their family’s honor and to pay back the favor they had no choice. i tried to let the readers also know that cody is a genius for humans but average intelligence for his race. so that makes him lazy. so how would i go about this. and for location i choose the iga mountain in japan because there are a lot of legends about the area and i thought it would be a great place to set up camp for a shadow wolf. as for as the sub characters that were introduced, they wont be there for very much longer. as for the queens i wanted to make them childhood friends that were forced into political marriage. i also try to portray that even there is a war its a more laid back one. one of the war concepts was over who ate the last cookie and so instead of fighting each other they bring the clan into it. i was planning on explaining why the wolves live in the hills in this memory time thing. as for their tears and triumps im planning on adding that as flash backs because up until the school got destroyed it was a very uneventful life. outside of the twins experiments and class pranks. i also wanted to make rena and vardna try to act more childish considering their immortality. for rena considering she has a phoenix effect when she dies she is reborn again and for vardna she stays in her own sub space until called. the idea for their personalities is a left field version of washu’s. i really want this story to do well giving the fact that it is at a disadvantage
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    lol yea that would suck hey i your rep and now let me touch your skin badass1
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    i dont care if its bad fansub or not i want to revisit this story. i heard a rumor once that they are remaking the original but that died out. but bring on more great music and the new vtf series i wonder who the bad guys will be. badass1 but i have one thing to say i hope the story aint weak like 7. oops i started a debate
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    i will. outside of this story here im still on page one of its prequel. i know that most say write the prequel after the story is finished lol. well the story with that is i thought i took the scandisc that had eternal bonds on it when i was visiting family in the dakota’s and i go thru stuff to find out that i forgot it. and one night i was bored so i turned on the lappy i had before this one and i didnt have a clue about what i was writing but it felt like my hands did so i went along for the ride and after i left the dakota’s the writing well dried up. i even got idea’s for eternal bonds while visiting the spirit mound and the bad lands but again after i left everything disappeared. blush1
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    i will try as soon as i get past the memory stuff and a few writing blocks that im having with some of the future points like when the intro of his insert x amount of great grandparents. they way i saw it that octavian and pike would be along till they get back from they’re trip which in real time is no more that hour. i also trying to figure out how im going to have the old smiths weapons try to trick them. they are so many things i have to do that it aint funny. an ill admit i am having problems because i never written more than 10 pages max on any story. i even stepped aside and started a bio sheet to try to help me with the mannerism of the characters and even that aint doin so well. but i want this to be a very fun ride for almost everyone given my hadicap in this field. i want to try to perfect it the best that i can.
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    yea prices are high i want it to go down
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