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    shadowmann2330
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    good god im just loving this fanfiction, i can’t stop putting myself in the place of you!

    im just so sad that the next part hasn’t been put out yet!

    review wise its gold!

    i see nothing wrong with the story as i don’t know any more than is revealed.

    the only thing im confuzzled about is what your wearing during this chapter…is he nude?

    If you mentioned it during another chapter its always nice to go over it (not necessarily as detailed in this chapter just because your readers would already have a picture from the first chapter) again.

    other than that im waiting for the next chapter with lots of enthusiasm!

    my apologys for the late response as well!

    shadowmann2330
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    gramatical errors aside..

    how was the story?

    are you exicited for the next installment?

    it will be here soon and im looking for grammtical errors!!!!

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    to tell you the truth i think i have to hear the song first before i can really delegate on it.

    may i have its title and author?

    shadowmann2330
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    as for me i can understand it clearly

    minus the part with the angel and the train demon, the entire story is well orchestrated and i understand the boys position and what happened to him.

    ill not say what im thinking about cause of spoilers, but its starting to look really good.

    i am VERY much so looking forward to the next installment!

    im also waiting to see his reaction to little washu and if she forces him to call him little or “chan”.

    i am very excited to se how your going to lay this story out, as im a newcoming fanfiction writer im always looking fo rbeeter ways to portray a scene and how to explain personalitys within a timely manner.

    those are my biggest two problems with my writing at the momnet.

    anyway cant wait for chapter 2

    also this chapter should be named chapter 1 not 2

    :)

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    i must say this is a superb example of a self insertion

    i dont really have much to critique yet, as there is not much to this short opening.

    as for questions i have a few

    i noticed the command line held the word NAJA in it.

    im curoius but is the silver-blue haired girl mentioned above the one from OVA3?

    then this will answer the command line text naja for me.

    as to how she became separate from noike ill guess ill find out wont i?

    *goes to read chapter t2

    as a side note i feel that you are more than welcome in the fanfiction thread and i myself have begun work on my own book.

    if you would not mind it terribly, could you read my fanfiction and post some critique?]

    act 2 of chapter 1 will be up shortly hopefully by the end of the week.

    as usual i appreciate ALL forms of critque, good or bad.

    ill even accept flaming so long as you take the time to explain how bad i was at it.

    shadowmann2330
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    DAMN YOU AND YOUR DELAY TACTICS!

    <.

    shadowmann2330
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    i feel happy!

    expect me to be there!

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    its a bit big so I added a spoiler to keep size down

    okay those who opened the spoiler must now make A DC 40 WILL SAVE.

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    if you failed your save, you become affected by charm person (no bonuses if you are the same sex)

    i fully expected washu to pass that

    but you know how critical fails come up at the worst moments?

    this was one of them.

    so about me, one day i found a magic lamp which contained a single genie witha single wish.

    i wished that i was phat.

    the world runs on technicalities i swear.

    i love TM even OVA 3 (for those who were not present at the rant thread I STOPPED POSTING AND I RETRACT MY ARGUMENTS

    just don’t go posting about my opinions i have taken them back because they were causing problems. now pay me five bucks for that 1 minute you made me waste.XD)

    im hyper 20 yrs old. and single, since birth. i currently work at a branch of funimation as a scripter (currently in training), i live in a apartment in mass, adore all types of technological entertainment, and all types of washu. wow that came out of nowhere…. not sure were that leaves us….

    that leaves us with this question.

    its obvious that your more hardcore than jhonny depp..

    but what about Adam Lambert??

    http://cdn.wg.uproxx.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/adam-lambert-gay.jpg

    shadowmann2330
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    id like to ask a question, when you all sit down and record the podcast, are you all actually in the room together?

    or is this a skype recording(internet chat room with mics)

    is the answer is the chat room, may i ask if i can participate in the next podcast or whenever you feel you can schedual me in?

    if its an actual meeting, might i ask were it takes place? if its regional i might drive down(with your absolutle permission first)

    and participate.

    of course this is all assuming that you do not mind having me as a guest.

    heres hoping im not considered a fool!

    i do have skype too,,, just in case

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