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  • Kiyoka
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    For Washuu wrote:

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    …oh.

    Ryoko: WTF?! D:< Ayeka: Oh my.. n.n Washu: f*** yeah Mihoshi: Umm o.O

    Kiyone: Kill me now D:

    Kiyoka
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    As entertaining as the actual series! Just like the series I could read it over and over. They share to me, almost the same value as the animations. (althought better than OAV 3 haha)

    My favourite is a close tie between the Yume arc and the Ayeka’s pet one. The latter heavily inspiring me for my fic. It truley served as the essential core of the plot. If you care for spoilers, do not read the the paragraph below which is from the book.

    A creature so dangerous and threatening to Jurai if abused could become a dangerous threat. All it is is a cute little creature that feeds on Jurai trees! It didn’t strike me as strange. It was interesting, and weird to know such a thing could be a threat. Its one of the, if not THE most secret of secrets on on Jurai.

    Its just a shame the Hasegawa novels weren’t in manga form, or more Tenchi Universe stories in manga form. =(

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    evilpii wrote:

    Finally, I have read the first two chapters of Kiyoka’s Tenchi Muyo! in Love 3. I apologize for the supreme delay in doing so, as well as my failure to produce Evil Kiyone and Dark Ayeka fan art. ^^;

    The first chapter seemed a bit cryptic during an initial reading. It wasn’t until the end of chapter that I was certain that this was set in Universe continuity some time after TM!iL1. During the reading, I humored the idea that “Future Kiyone” might be from Universe continuity and mistakenly dropped into the OVA continuity. Considering the date of publish, I considered the possibility she might run across Noike and do something about her… />:)” title=”>:)” class=”bbcode_smiley” /> Perhaps some other spacetime shenanigans can handle that. ^-^v</p> <p>My main question for the chapter was why Tenchi wouldn’t recognize Future Kiyone. She is described as having her hair tied back with the goggles/shades from <i><s><i></i></s>TM!iL2<e></e></i>, but does this really change her enough for him not to recognize her? True, it works for Clark Kent, so I can’t complain too much. <img decoding= Overall the chapter read like a Universe script with plenty of situation comedy between Ryoko, Ayeka, and Sasami, which goes pretty well. ^^v

    This takes place between TMIL and Tenchi Forever. So this is why he doesn’t recognise her.

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    Chapter 2 continues a lot of that comedy. It was amusing to imagine Future Kiyone running from Washu in a “Tex Avery”-like chase. ^^v Though the plot itself is not progressed much, a few hints of overarching ideas seem to be mentioned, namely Tenchi’s exams, perhaps college entrance, and the necessity of repair to the spacetime controller. Arguably, Washu could be lying to stall Future Kiyone.

    The grammar seemed to need some work, though I believe Chapter 2 was better in that respect than Chapter 1. Some of that might be explained through the differences in English between the U.K. and the U.S. I’m curious to see where this leads as little has been divulged in these two chapters. I have yet to see this “Evil Kiyone” for whom the author is so known. ^^; I was mildly disappointed by that and hope this will change in future chapters. ^_-

    Grammar is my weakest point. But I don’t care. Proof readers correct it for me. I’m grateful my weakness isn’t something that cannot be changed by proof reading.

    Chapter 3 is 90% done. I went back and changed alot, removed scenes. All making it up to date with my current skill. I just need to find a proof reader.

    Oh and I have wrote a little of Evil Kiyone already. I mean, I need to nail her character down now rather than when I “need” to write her. I am constantly asking myself when I write her speech “Is this something Kiyone would say with an evil twist?” The unfortunate part to this is you wont really see her till *thinks* chapter 6.

    Kiyoka
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    Mmm!

    I simply planned to read a fraction of the latest one you posted, but I felt intrigued by it. It was not the normal love story, but something darker, something that broke the peace. I felt curious to read more. My eyes drifted along the torrent of words. I saw no stumbling. The words flowed as they should.

    One particular sentence caught my eye. “Her face was twisted with a sick glee that was far outside her character to possess.” Very interesting, I will put that in my note file that houses inspirational sentences for my story!

    Good job, I’ll read the rest in order this time!

    Kiyoka
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    *sigh* I’m going with Kiyone’s. Why? It was a nice insight into her character. We saw her relaxed, smiling and at peace. It portrayed to me the peaceful, no trouble aspect of the series.

    Mihoshi’s had to be the funniest for me. :Cheeks:

    Kiyoka
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    Blade-of-the-Moon wrote:

    Kiyoka wrote:

    Blade-of-the-Moon wrote:


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    I love the last cel you listed. Even though I only own Kiyone cels I’d make room for that one :Cheeks:

    Ah..your one of those are you ? heh I have to say Kiyone doesn’t get nearly the love she should.

    The Daughter of Darkness one ? Yeah I really like that one..loved the outfits she wore in it and it’s quite large. I think I have 3 or 4 from that movie. My biggest complaint in that film was Tenchi slapping Ryoko..there wasn’t really a need to do that from what I could tell. So many better ways to handle the situation.

    I’m not sure what to say from that scene. But… yeah maybe he could of just shouted really loud.

    The one cel I’m craving for is the one of a closeup of Kiyone in the dimensional cannon from TMIL <3

    And yeah incase you didn’t notice I’m a huge Kiyone fan

    Kiyoka
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    I love the last cel you listed. Even though I only own Kiyone cels I’d make room for that one :Cheeks:

    Kiyoka
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    MOst excellent, you have a Sakuya cell. *grabs the scissors and matches*
    Kiyoka
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    Mittens wrote:

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    Always a fav. Kiyo/Tenchi art :) Used to like them as a couple.

    Wow that pic is old. I was the one who reuested that off a friend :p

    Kiyoka
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    Kiyone looks like a young teenager there :D
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