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    This segment seems to be just a peek into what’s happening around Elliot. It confirms Washu’s aid to the young man, though not necessarily her actual motives.

    I’m still wondering why Ayeka and Mihoshi were involved here at all. They walked on stage, dropped a few characteristic lines, and then wandered off. They didn’t really have any effect on the scene and seem unnecessary. Their purpose of letting the reader know Washu was away could have been easily served by Washu musing to herself, or by a grumbling stomach.

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    This segment answered most of my questions laid from “Prelude” and “Within His Mind”. However, I too am curious about the angel and demon figures.

    In this chapter, the dialogue worked better than in the previous chapter as there actually had some action occurring, namely his near-awakening. Aesthetically, it’s reminiscent of Megatron’s rise to consciousness in “Sick Mind” from Transformers Prime.

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    Reading the prelude, I was interested to know the reason for Washu’s study of this particular person. Likely, I’ll read on to find what is meant by her words regarding him, as well as the cause of his apparent wounds. This piece reminded me of my own opening to Tenchi vs. MiB, so far as tone and intentionally vague description. In that, I’m pleased with it. ^^v

    However, I’m curious about the remark regarding the sanctity of human life. Washu herself has created and manipulated the structure of living beings before. Doesn’t this contradict some of what is said?

    The author’s note is distracting to me. Much of it seems an allusion to The Last Action Hero and similar stories of the mingling between “reality” and “fiction”. Perhaps this might have been better integrated into the piece by either Washu’s thoughts or in later chapters from the boy’s point of view.

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    For Washuu wrote:

    THANK YOU, pii… thank you! :D

    No problem. Just doing my part. :Tenchismile:

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    I know you, at least by name. ^^; I was active at the same time and saw some of your works nominated, and winning, some of the TMFFA awards of yesteryear. ^^v Welcome! ^o^ Rest assured that you will be welcomed here. ^^V

    It’s also nice to see someone else who is a shameless self-promoter. ^^; I’d follow wwwwhhhhoooo’s advice, as well as check out some of the other threads under “fan fiction”. ^_-

    evilpii
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    I did a little more digging and found the 2002 TMFFA award nominees as well, which has been added to the initial post. ^^v Also, for the curious, here are the winner’s pages. ^^v

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    2001 Winners

    * 2002 Winners

    * 2003 Winners

    * 2004 Winners

    • I’d like to call to your attention that our newest “old” member, Roas Atrades, has not only been nominated, but has *won* a few categories. ^^V

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Kiyoka wrote:

wwwwhhhhoooo wrote:

Interesting characer design for this Itsugi (dunno why, but in all seriousness when I read it his voice sounded to me something like George Takei…dunno why) the air of neutrality about him is a bit unsettling and this short excerpt brings up alot of questions about him: is he ‘good’ or ‘evil’? What are his motives? What kind of pills is he really giving to Kiyone? EVIL pills to turn her…EVIL???!!! 😯 could go a number of ways with that.

Eh, I also threw together Itsugi’s personalit yon the fly. I gave little thought to him. Also the name took me 5 seconds to think of haha. RANDOM!

The pills are really painkillers. As for his motives, I covered in the spoiler I said :p

Of all things, I saw Itsugi as a cross between the merchant in Resident Evil 4 and Death in Masque of the Red Death (Vincent Price version). ^^; I could see him played as an interested third party, neutral but willing to arm or aid either side, just to see how it all turns out. >:3

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JGZinv wrote:

Most of those are from Tenchi-don I believe…

They are. I keep them in an omake directory with 4-koma and other random stuff. ^^;

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Kiyoka wrote:

Huh.. gives me an idea for a fanfic. She’s bound to harbour hatred for Mihoshi after that. A stranger comes along to find a lonely hard seething with hatred and slowly dying. He offers her the chance to go to Earth where she is. But secretly he uses the hatred in her heart to turn her into his own puppet. A puppet that will I dunno, kill Tenchi? Who is this man? I don’t know, I just made this up!

Like this friend? ^-^v

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(Source: Punistation’s scans, before it became defunct. ^^; )

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