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wwwwhhhhoooo wrote:
Guess what??? I read chapter 2 …
& I gotta’ say I loved it. I think it’s good you don’t want to have
too muchdialogue, but when you do it sounds very authentic to the characters. The scene I have particularly in mind was the dialogue between Ryoko & Ayeka in the onsen; Ryoko’s always ‘bleh’ about details (not concerning Tenchi) & Ayeka’s usually the one to be concerned about any new happenings in the house. Washu’s ‘mission’ to find Kiyone… 
great stuff, look forward to more (no hurry though!)I’m glad you got through reading that. I couldn’t now. I didn’t really know how to write descriptive writting well then. How to capture the reader with vivid descriptions of actions and such. I’ll be happy when I finally get chapter 4 out. That’s where I excel at, whats in that chapter!
I easily know Tearatone’s chapters are better than my first two in terms of writting. Trust me :plank:
Mittens wrote:I remember reading the first chapter or two of your story ages ago when it was newly posted to fanfiction.net and really liking it. Must admit I haven’t read it recently but I will at some point. I do like how it’s written. Only thing I remember is some grammar/spelling issues but since we have different spellings (uk/us) perhaps some of it was right (I was like 15 when I read this, didn’t know). It’s just important to keep on going with your story :p and it’s good that you haven’t given up on it at all.
Ha make me feel like its been a decade why don’t you
I quickly read through the first chapter and saw a few spelling errors. My grammar has always been my weak point bleh. I’m English and will be using my words so bear that in mind.
Can’t wait to show you more recent works then if you liked it
