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    Ryoko may be my favorite but Washu is my Second! :D welcome to the forum and hope you like it here! :Tenchismile:
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    This may not be much of a character to re-cast but an interesting thing to see, would be a re-cast of Mayuka from The Daughter of Darkness. She could be recast into the OVA but I wouldnt be too sure how her role would be within the house. If you were to propose Kiyone joining in as a re-cast in the OVA it could fit in, possibly, since in the movie she was in there. The movie also had lighthawk wings so it has a bit more of a closeness to the OVA story than Universe even though it is overall a standalone movie.
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
    • June 25, 2013 at 3:12 PM
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    I must say, I haven’t even heard of this game until just recently and since i watched gameplay it has my attention. I’m a huge Borderlands fan, and this game looks like it has the works of Borderlands, Mass Effect and Halo all in one. A definite must for me ^.^
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    I’ve just completely finished the first chapter, and re-read it to make sure I had everything fully comprehended and I have to say it is an excellent job! :D

    I will echo what many of the others said; you do have the way to make the characters say exactly what we would expect them to say. I could hear the characters’ voices as I through.

    I noticed that some stuff was misspelled but like i read on this thread, words are different in the U.K. than in the U.S in general, and it doesnt take away from the main plot or jest of the story you’ve created.

    Again it’s really well done and I will read the other chapters when I can. I look forward to seeing this continue and so far, this is definitely something I would watch if it was to be adapted. :Tenchismile:

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    This definitely was deserving of the title “Funfic” and I’d like to echo what chuck said. It was so great and definitely gave me a nice laugh ^.^ keep up the work on the story, I look forward to reading more of it! I love its wackiness and strangeness cx :Tenchismile:
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    The nameless tree was probably my favorite arc besides the Garyu arc. The Garyu arc is what I am currently drawing inspiration from for the OVA 4 i am currently in the process of writing. The depth of Garyu as a villain is well done. His plot to rebuild Oku II was just something that stuck out to me, especially since he took Ayeka and made her believe she loved him.

    I also like seeing Ayeka use her full potential in a fight and seeing the side of her no one else has seen. Just as we see Ryoko’s side with the Unnamed Tree. It all just contributes to the reason these two manga series are so well done, they follow the characters so well and give so much to take in when you read them.

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    I’m in for this one as well! :Tenchismile:
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    Il admit I didn’t go too deep into action description or behavior , mainly for the fact of people knowing the show itself. If it was brand new(like my personal Violetta X ) I detail it a lot more. I may have needed a bit more time but that was what I made was a pretty decent opening. Haha but I do know I need a professional editor Soon regardless.
    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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    I just read Homecomings: Masaki and I really loved it! I have to echo the thought of that being its own alternate aside story if it is delved into deeper and such.

    The manga really does set up a nice way and bond that Tenchi could have with Ayeka in such a way. And it could fit perfectly into how I’m writing that there are times Tenchi would want alone time with one and not the other and vice versa. During one of these, I could definitely throw in a date, mainly while they are in the Time compressed dimension which is the place he marries them after nearly a year within it(which i have a way of making that work too).

    For Washu, I was thinking that she could have the part to play in which They all 3 are in the onsen, (planning this scene) and as Ryoko talks to her, she will open up a LOT about her past and a bit of a…negative modification to Ryoko. In the end that modification didn’t work however, seeing as Ryoko by the end of the series in what I have planned, is a child. Washu steps up as well to be a bit of a motherly figure to Ayeka as well.

    Mihoshi i have the idea of her getting upset(as would be expected) and she can’t look at Tenchi, Ayeka, or Ryoko. Washu and Nobuyuki(who is visiting around this time in what i plan) talk to her, and tell her “Your destiny may have been to meet him then to go foward farther, destiny has an odd way of bring people together, whether it be for love, or for experience and knowledge and encouragement.” something like that.

    anyway those are a few little tidbits of things I brainstormed haha bth_Ryoko1

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
    shadowsfall0
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    I do really take your comments and ideas into consideration, feedback is always a key in writing something and perfecting it to the best of your abilities :D

    The solution of marrying both was not my original intention but I wanted to go for what seemed to be the more likely solution. Although that is the common ending for Tenchi to have the open ending in terms of romance but the plot itself passing. All stories (even though this is opinion) have an ending and have closure.

    Garyu definitely is a villain that is formidable. And that idea of him using Tenchi as well as hunting after Washu and the Chousin is to help rebuild his planet Oku II.

    The fact of him and Ryoko having lighthawk wings works as well, and is a brilliant idea. The Mass is as well but has a different effect and may overpower him. I could use them but I shall see how, if I do actually incorporate them. With Ayeka, I could actually…. ooooo…perhaps she give him a seed to one of the Juraian trees? 😯 hmmm still quite a bit of thinking to do.

    Chapter 1 is close to finished however and finalized as well so it’l be up here very soon 🙂

    "For the curse of life is the curse of want. And so, you peer... Into the fog, in hope of answers."
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